Comments received on poems by alan b
Eyes Outlasting Years
sorenbarrett said:
Memories of sadness and joy in this poem nicely written Alan
September 3rd, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Memories of sadness and joy in this poem nicely written Alan
September 3rd, 2026 04:06
A great fall
sorenbarrett said:
It is the ending of this poem that captures me. I take this half myth half history write as a metaphor more personal applying to individuals and indeed a great fall of human respect. Nicely written Alan
August 31st, 2026 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
It is the ending of this poem that captures me. I take this half myth half history write as a metaphor more personal applying to individuals and indeed a great fall of human respect. Nicely written Alan
August 31st, 2026 04:57
Snow filled vision
sorenbarrett said:
A collage where detail obscures the meaning. So many can not see the bigger picture. A lovely write with a message well written. A fave my friend
August 30th, 2026 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
A collage where detail obscures the meaning. So many can not see the bigger picture. A lovely write with a message well written. A fave my friend
August 30th, 2026 06:28
A cowardly escape
sorenbarrett said:
You have opened the wound and now it drains the infection of the human race. War what we can not face in ourselves and what we desire but others have. We face our greed and have gone numb to the pain of others. A most poetic write and a fave
August 27th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
You have opened the wound and now it drains the infection of the human race. War what we can not face in ourselves and what we desire but others have. We face our greed and have gone numb to the pain of others. A most poetic write and a fave
August 27th, 2026 03:56
Lost Words
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording evokes images in this write. Very nicely done.
August 25th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording evokes images in this write. Very nicely done.
August 25th, 2026 04:45
Silent and Amazed
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a scene painted it is cold and threatening yet clear and mysterious with an unknown ending. Well done
August 24th, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a scene painted it is cold and threatening yet clear and mysterious with an unknown ending. Well done
August 24th, 2026 04:46
Violets on an old stone grave
sorenbarrett said:
It is the mood that this one casts through its images that gets the fave. Nicely written
August 23rd, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
It is the mood that this one casts through its images that gets the fave. Nicely written
August 23rd, 2026 04:34
Michelangelo\'s pieta in flirence
sorenbarrett said:
This poem soon shows itself to be of a stone sculpture and what one is more famous that the one mentioned. Well done
July 2nd, 2026 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem soon shows itself to be of a stone sculpture and what one is more famous that the one mentioned. Well done
July 2nd, 2026 03:22
Michelangelo\'s pieta in flirence
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a lovely write
July 2nd, 2026 02:50
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a lovely write
July 2nd, 2026 02:50
Michelangelo\'s pieta in flirence
Teddy.15 said:
I live in Florence (Firenze) and as I noticed your title and read your poem I could feel Dante Alighieri my compliments for a lovely poem. 🌹
July 2nd, 2026 02:26
Teddy.15 said:
I live in Florence (Firenze) and as I noticed your title and read your poem I could feel Dante Alighieri my compliments for a lovely poem. 🌹
July 2nd, 2026 02:26
A luminous mind
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write using the image of nature and a web woven that may well be a metaphor of thought itself. Nicely done and a fave
July 1st, 2026 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write using the image of nature and a web woven that may well be a metaphor of thought itself. Nicely done and a fave
July 1st, 2026 09:15
Whispering leaves
Fay Slimm. said:
I love this perfect penning os three-line tribute to whispering leaves - - great read alan.
December 28th, 2022 12:52
Fay Slimm. said:
I love this perfect penning os three-line tribute to whispering leaves - - great read alan.
December 28th, 2022 12:52
Where love lies
nkznoodles said:
this is really nice and touching. thank you for sharing
December 27th, 2022 17:28
nkznoodles said:
this is really nice and touching. thank you for sharing
December 27th, 2022 17:28
Soft rain
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, \'packs a punch for it weight\'
as we like to say around my way..
thanks for sharing
December 16th, 2022 06:42
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, \'packs a punch for it weight\'
as we like to say around my way..
thanks for sharing
December 16th, 2022 06:42
True Beauty
arqios said:
The mind is in the eye of the beholder! Yes! Awesome stuff. Our capacity for beauty lies deep within us.
December 4th, 2022 05:42
arqios said:
The mind is in the eye of the beholder! Yes! Awesome stuff. Our capacity for beauty lies deep within us.
December 4th, 2022 05:42
