Comments received on poems by Lola Portillo-Wright



Finally here
Moonsight said:

Really great poem about self-growth ! It\'s short and sweet and captivating.

December 7th, 2022 20:49

What is Femininity?
Doggerel Dave said:

OK if a male pops in?
That was a pretty comprehensive summary of the attitudes, mores and norms surrounding women in our society..
Food for thought at times.
Cannot go past Joan Peter’s comment above – she cornered the line which sums it all up. Nothing to add after that.


December 3rd, 2022 00:05

What is Femininity?
Kinsey Peterson said:

\"femininity, it is whatever we women want it to be.\"
People need to recognize their own biases against women and your poem is a beautiful marker of the progress we are making as society. Women are beginning to be recognized as individuals. Thank you for sharing your views on the subject with such an incredible piece.

December 1st, 2022 13:00

Pink Veins.
ruthtitus54 said:

While it was an unexpected way to use the color pink I really found it interesting great job!!!

November 30th, 2022 18:49