Comments received on poems by blueeyes18
Summer\'s night
L. B. Mek said:
simply love your imagery
and poetic ambition, dear poet
thanks for sharing and for inspiring
my little scribbled attempt at a poetic reply:
(horizon\'s pinpricks, awaiting
to curate our demise
wingless, yet flickering like fairies
between, inertia and life
we navigate or try to, till
too late, comes to greet
to free or at the very least
change our scenery
that singe of inevitability..)
January 27th, 2023 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
simply love your imagery
and poetic ambition, dear poet
thanks for sharing and for inspiring
my little scribbled attempt at a poetic reply:
(horizon\'s pinpricks, awaiting
to curate our demise
wingless, yet flickering like fairies
between, inertia and life
we navigate or try to, till
too late, comes to greet
to free or at the very least
change our scenery
that singe of inevitability..)
January 27th, 2023 04:25
Silent tears
L. B. Mek said:
your sincerity is impressive,
I laud your poetic ambition
thanks for sharing
January 23rd, 2023 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
your sincerity is impressive,
I laud your poetic ambition
thanks for sharing
January 23rd, 2023 05:28