Comments received on poems by Adriaan Nothnagel
Prison WithIn
L. B. Mek said:
\'A force within me lends strength to my plea,
To break free from this prison, to truly be free.
So, I persevere, against the tides of despair,
For I know deep inside, there\'s a future to share.\'
Amen!
thank you for choosing to share
from your cup of positivity
such a rare trait of modernity
June 16th, 2023 03:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'A force within me lends strength to my plea,
To break free from this prison, to truly be free.
So, I persevere, against the tides of despair,
For I know deep inside, there\'s a future to share.\'
Amen!
thank you for choosing to share
from your cup of positivity
such a rare trait of modernity
June 16th, 2023 03:43
On the sea
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing theme and wonderful flow
thanks for sharing
January 13th, 2023 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing theme and wonderful flow
thanks for sharing
January 13th, 2023 05:53