Comments received on poems by Pazuzu



It’s no Citizen Kane (An Apocalypse in Noir)
L. B. Mek said:

really well written, thanks for sharing

March 10th, 2023 04:22

It’s no Citizen Kane (An Apocalypse in Noir)
David Wakeling said:

This is quite good.Reminds me of The Big Sleep or The Maltese Falcon.Gotta love black and white movies

March 9th, 2023 15:52

God\'s Original Sin was Gaslighting
2781 said:

That worked well, Eve.

February 27th, 2023 21:13

My Corpse Flows Upstream, My Body Flows Down
L. B. Mek said:

what a poetic talent you showcase
a great write! with seamless flow
(can\'t help thinking
\'Leviathan, be thy name\'
I feel you\'ve given voice to \'moby dick\'
and all of \'Nature\'s\' monsters)
thanks for sharing dear poet
even the long armed human ones...

January 16th, 2023 04:45

Hospitals Feel like God
Andi said:

Puddled is an amazing word to use!!

January 5th, 2023 13:24