Comments received on poems by Still Angry
Struggles
mvvenkataraman said:
The poem is written very well,
With admirable advice to deliver,
Thanks for this piece of poetry,
But, I also have a grievance?
If on a plate, lots of tasty dishes are kept, but a bit of shit is also added to that plate, will it be a feast to enjoy?
Why the word shit is added to spoil its beauty?
January 11th, 2023 02:01
mvvenkataraman said:
The poem is written very well,
With admirable advice to deliver,
Thanks for this piece of poetry,
But, I also have a grievance?
If on a plate, lots of tasty dishes are kept, but a bit of shit is also added to that plate, will it be a feast to enjoy?
Why the word shit is added to spoil its beauty?
January 11th, 2023 02:01