Comments received on poems by danirm108
Falling in love
L. B. Mek said:
this is so beautifully spun
from that vivid bus couple, imagery
to your yearning\'s rhythmic poetry
thanks for sharing, dear poet
you have a wonderful talent..
(personally
my charred fingers, have long
given-up hope
of entwining with another\'s
at least in this lifetime,
yet
in that call, where
my green eyes, gaze upon a couple
gliding through life
upon each other\'s wingtips
like you, i too
can\'t help but recall those past brushes with love
i was gifted by fate and I too
begin, to roll a film reel in my mind
enriched bright by my past, yet dimmed black n white, noir
in an overwhelmingly bleak, theme
lacking faith in a future
where those sun kissed hallowed clouds of love
may once again gaze upon my path in life...)
Happy New Year, here\'s hoping that True Love
visits you in these coming twelve months
the kind of Love, where you start accumulating
\'your last, first\'s\' of a lifetimes budding romance
January 9th, 2023 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
this is so beautifully spun
from that vivid bus couple, imagery
to your yearning\'s rhythmic poetry
thanks for sharing, dear poet
you have a wonderful talent..
(personally
my charred fingers, have long
given-up hope
of entwining with another\'s
at least in this lifetime,
yet
in that call, where
my green eyes, gaze upon a couple
gliding through life
upon each other\'s wingtips
like you, i too
can\'t help but recall those past brushes with love
i was gifted by fate and I too
begin, to roll a film reel in my mind
enriched bright by my past, yet dimmed black n white, noir
in an overwhelmingly bleak, theme
lacking faith in a future
where those sun kissed hallowed clouds of love
may once again gaze upon my path in life...)
Happy New Year, here\'s hoping that True Love
visits you in these coming twelve months
the kind of Love, where you start accumulating
\'your last, first\'s\' of a lifetimes budding romance
January 9th, 2023 05:20