Comments received on poems by A B
We Were Always About to Arrive
Poetic Licence said:
Another fantastic write, I can see all those places clearly as I read through, very enjoyable read
February 20th, 2025 16:12
Poetic Licence said:
Another fantastic write, I can see all those places clearly as I read through, very enjoyable read
February 20th, 2025 16:12
We Were Always About to Arrive
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous painting of the scene.
February 20th, 2025 14:36
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous painting of the scene.
February 20th, 2025 14:36
We Were Always About to Arrive
sorenbarrett said:
A clear tribute to a city and its markers. Lovely well worded with great images
February 20th, 2025 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
A clear tribute to a city and its markers. Lovely well worded with great images
February 20th, 2025 14:10
There Was A Space
Neville said:
I am rapidly becoming more and more enamoured both with .. and by your ink my fine literary friend .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 09:37
Neville said:
I am rapidly becoming more and more enamoured both with .. and by your ink my fine literary friend .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 09:37
I Have Never Been to New York, But I Remember It Anyway
Neville said:
What an incredible introduction to your ink .. I am so glad I stopped by .. write on my fine literary friend and welcome to MPS .. kindest regards and all good things .. Neville
February 18th, 2025 15:11
Neville said:
What an incredible introduction to your ink .. I am so glad I stopped by .. write on my fine literary friend and welcome to MPS .. kindest regards and all good things .. Neville
February 18th, 2025 15:11
I Have Never Been to New York, But I Remember It Anyway
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 18th, 2025 12:18
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 18th, 2025 12:18
I Have Never Been to New York, But I Remember It Anyway
Poetic Licence said:
That is just a fantastic piece of writing, really enjoyed the read and will again later.
February 18th, 2025 08:12
Poetic Licence said:
That is just a fantastic piece of writing, really enjoyed the read and will again later.
February 18th, 2025 08:12
I Have Never Been to New York, But I Remember It Anyway
sorenbarrett said:
Genius writing in this piece that pulls at the heart strings of any true American that remembers what it was founded for and that inscription of poetry by Emma Lazarus now resurrected in stone on the Statue of Liberty
\"Not like the brazen giant of Greek fame,
With conquering limbs astride from land to land;
Here at our sea-washed, sunset gates shall stand
A mighty woman with a torch, whose flame
Is the imprisoned lightning, and her name
Mother of Exiles. From her beacon-hand
Glows world-wide welcome; her mild eyes command
The air-bridged harbor that twin cities frame.
\"Keep, ancient lands, your storied pomp!\" cries she
With silent lips. \"Give me your tired, your poor,
Your huddled masses yearning to breathe free,
The wretched refuse of your teeming shore.
Send these, the homeless, tempest-tost to me,
I lift my lamp beside the golden door!\"
Your poem evokes these thoughts now mere hypocritical echoes of a time past and a nation built on dreams ash.
February 18th, 2025 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
Genius writing in this piece that pulls at the heart strings of any true American that remembers what it was founded for and that inscription of poetry by Emma Lazarus now resurrected in stone on the Statue of Liberty
\"Not like the brazen giant of Greek fame,
With conquering limbs astride from land to land;
Here at our sea-washed, sunset gates shall stand
A mighty woman with a torch, whose flame
Is the imprisoned lightning, and her name
Mother of Exiles. From her beacon-hand
Glows world-wide welcome; her mild eyes command
The air-bridged harbor that twin cities frame.
\"Keep, ancient lands, your storied pomp!\" cries she
With silent lips. \"Give me your tired, your poor,
Your huddled masses yearning to breathe free,
The wretched refuse of your teeming shore.
Send these, the homeless, tempest-tost to me,
I lift my lamp beside the golden door!\"
Your poem evokes these thoughts now mere hypocritical echoes of a time past and a nation built on dreams ash.
February 18th, 2025 07:10
I Have Never Been to New York, But I Remember It Anyway
Doggerel Dave said:
Know the feeling. Visited for two weeks as a result of that pull. Not regretted.
If no one has already done so - welcome. Enjoy your stay at MPS. An interactive site, it works best when poets respond to other’s work and reply to commentary on their own poetry.
February 18th, 2025 06:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Know the feeling. Visited for two weeks as a result of that pull. Not regretted.
If no one has already done so - welcome. Enjoy your stay at MPS. An interactive site, it works best when poets respond to other’s work and reply to commentary on their own poetry.
February 18th, 2025 06:51
The Treatise
Poetic Licence said:
i really enjoyed, takes you on a journey as you read but also awakens the imagination, good read
December 27th, 2024 22:48
Poetic Licence said:
i really enjoyed, takes you on a journey as you read but also awakens the imagination, good read
December 27th, 2024 22:48
Eternal Rule Of The Game
Alan R said:
The lovers obey
The eternal rule
To wreak and unwind
Their pellicle spool
very beautiful
February 2nd, 2024 08:59
Alan R said:
The lovers obey
The eternal rule
To wreak and unwind
Their pellicle spool
very beautiful
February 2nd, 2024 08:59
Eternal Rule Of The Game
A B said:
As it\'s my very first contribution, I would really appreciate some comments and opinions - positive or negative - from those of you that feel inclined to.
July 24th, 2023 23:50
A B said:
As it\'s my very first contribution, I would really appreciate some comments and opinions - positive or negative - from those of you that feel inclined to.
July 24th, 2023 23:50
