Comments received on poems by A B



Eternal Rule Of The Game
Alan R said:

The lovers obey

The eternal rule

To wreak and unwind

Their pellicle spool



very beautiful


February 2nd, 2024 08:59

Eternal Rule Of The Game
A B said:

As it\'s my very first contribution, I would really appreciate some comments and opinions - positive or negative - from those of you that feel inclined to.

July 24th, 2023 23:50