Comments received on poems by A B



When You Came In
rengoku said:

beautiful

December 13th, 2024 00:10

When You Came In
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 12th, 2024 18:17

Common Purpose
Tony36 said:

Excellent

November 30th, 2024 15:55

Eternal Rule Of The Game
Alan R said:

The lovers obey

The eternal rule

To wreak and unwind

Their pellicle spool



very beautiful


February 2nd, 2024 08:59

Eternal Rule Of The Game
A B said:

As it\'s my very first contribution, I would really appreciate some comments and opinions - positive or negative - from those of you that feel inclined to.

July 24th, 2023 23:50