Comments received on poems by Jaden Henry 12
Heartbroken
L. B. Mek said:
an impassioned inking of a relatable pain
thanks for sharing
(indeed, yet
with every dawn, we welcome
that rare possibility
today, just might be the day
we meet
one of those genuine, good one\'s
and that, hope
is enough for us, to find a way
to wade through
our cesspool society, choosing
to believe
there is more good, that bad
in our life\'s horizons)
March 3rd, 2023 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
an impassioned inking of a relatable pain
thanks for sharing
(indeed, yet
with every dawn, we welcome
that rare possibility
today, just might be the day
we meet
one of those genuine, good one\'s
and that, hope
is enough for us, to find a way
to wade through
our cesspool society, choosing
to believe
there is more good, that bad
in our life\'s horizons)
March 3rd, 2023 05:59