Comments received on poems by anfisa
Him
L. B. Mek said:
such a relatable write, thanks for sharing
(when we feel, we do so
unintentionally/intuitively
Oscar\'s actors can try, to imitate
but there\'s a reason, Hollywood
is failing...
to love, is to feel
in its most chaotic and raw, nature
You
are not at fault for having feelings
for someone, who\'s
proven themselves, as unworthy
of your feelings
You
need only, recognise
what in you still, genuinely
like in him
then carry that, as a trait to look out for
when you next, fall for someone
this, analytical
way of thinking
may seem, detached or heartless
but it\'s a way
we, who choose to bravely
seek, love
must survive, or else
we may find our heart
torn to shreds, before
we find those who can cherish
us, for more
than our surface layer, aesthetics)
March 3rd, 2023 06:26
L. B. Mek said:
such a relatable write, thanks for sharing
(when we feel, we do so
unintentionally/intuitively
Oscar\'s actors can try, to imitate
but there\'s a reason, Hollywood
is failing...
to love, is to feel
in its most chaotic and raw, nature
You
are not at fault for having feelings
for someone, who\'s
proven themselves, as unworthy
of your feelings
You
need only, recognise
what in you still, genuinely
like in him
then carry that, as a trait to look out for
when you next, fall for someone
this, analytical
way of thinking
may seem, detached or heartless
but it\'s a way
we, who choose to bravely
seek, love
must survive, or else
we may find our heart
torn to shreds, before
we find those who can cherish
us, for more
than our surface layer, aesthetics)
March 3rd, 2023 06:26
Him
mvvenkataraman said:
Humans don\'t know what is true love,
They love for beauty or wealth only,
Unfortunately the word love is misused,
Until the world ends, none will understand,
The true meaning of love and affection,
A curse on humanity indeed,
Some cheat and some are cheated,
Or all cheat and all are cheated,
World has billions of humans,
Wait and choose the right one,
Still, expect from none gratitude,
Reciprocation normally is feeble!
March 2nd, 2023 22:45
mvvenkataraman said:
Humans don\'t know what is true love,
They love for beauty or wealth only,
Unfortunately the word love is misused,
Until the world ends, none will understand,
The true meaning of love and affection,
A curse on humanity indeed,
Some cheat and some are cheated,
Or all cheat and all are cheated,
World has billions of humans,
Wait and choose the right one,
Still, expect from none gratitude,
Reciprocation normally is feeble!
March 2nd, 2023 22:45