Comments received on poems by Jack Campbell
A winter Night
L. B. Mek said:
a great write!
thanks for sharing
please forgive my feeble poetic reply below
after reading your impassioned words, i couldn\'t resist
(sadly, some crimes can never be punished
enough
to make sense, or balance
the devastation
reaped by unsuspecting victims
whose ill-fate, is deemed
a casualty of existence, by such
a callous universe...)
March 8th, 2023 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
a great write!
thanks for sharing
please forgive my feeble poetic reply below
after reading your impassioned words, i couldn\'t resist
(sadly, some crimes can never be punished
enough
to make sense, or balance
the devastation
reaped by unsuspecting victims
whose ill-fate, is deemed
a casualty of existence, by such
a callous universe...)
March 8th, 2023 03:32