Comments received on poems by whiterosemary



It\'s Just a Joke
L. B. Mek said:

\'‘I didn’t mean it’,

but did you mean it when you used violence as a threat?\'
(dear Poet, how acutely
society\'s unspoken, you lay bare
violence in but a flick, of a blink
clown smiles, warped insidious
by devious plots and schemes
opportunism, rife in one track
mind\'s
friends, until they think they can\'t
be caught...)
I pray a day comes, when
we don\'t have to live doors open
so lady\'s may feel safer
because of a past we can\'t change
until then, we can but empathise
support, empower and appreciate
your Bravery and Fight!
A great write!
Sad, that\'s its so easily relatable
even to ignorant guys, like myself
Stay strong! sister

March 10th, 2023 04:14

It\'s Just a Joke
Doggerel Dave said:

No, don\'t let anyone tell you how to write, not even me. However Ihope you might find parts of this helpful:

https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-155194

Your message is definitely there. Enjoy your time at MPS.

March 9th, 2023 18:34