Island of Interrupted Dreams
charles69 said:

Very touching, and literary poem. I have never read a poem that deals with the sadness and disappointment of death, quite like this one. It is a good example of poetry now, but it may have the basis, with some rewriting to be a very, very good work. Keep writing.
Have you ever tried writing more traditional sacred poems. I bet you could write some fine ones. Try to achieve a balance in your writing would be my humble advice>

March 17th, 2023 21:50