Comments received on poems by rahulwairagar
Boss and me
L. B. Mek said:
your words remind me of Sylvia Plath\'s, legacy of defiance
from her poem, \'Ennui\':
\'tea eaves thwart those who court catastrophe\'
thanks for sharing, keep on believing
(I like the conviction in your poetic voice
ignore the noise
those who need to be spoon fed explanations
only read, to devalue others
so as
\'to fatten their pathetic egos\')
March 27th, 2023 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
your words remind me of Sylvia Plath\'s, legacy of defiance
from her poem, \'Ennui\':
\'tea eaves thwart those who court catastrophe\'
thanks for sharing, keep on believing
(I like the conviction in your poetic voice
ignore the noise
those who need to be spoon fed explanations
only read, to devalue others
so as
\'to fatten their pathetic egos\')
March 27th, 2023 05:25
Boss and me
David Wakeling said:
Normally I like rhyme but this is tedious to read.Nothing is explained.
March 27th, 2023 05:11
David Wakeling said:
Normally I like rhyme but this is tedious to read.Nothing is explained.
March 27th, 2023 05:11