Comments received on poems by writersblock



Remembrance
christianguild said:

Been there..done that... Good job :)

February 20th, 2016 17:25

An Unknown Feeling
De-nyce_A said:

This is so deep in such short words. NIce job

January 26th, 2016 00:53

Sorrow
Sarah_and_Elizabeth said:

Sorrow is a bitter friend.
Familiar in her ways.
An enemy though she may be
Throughout all your days.

Heartache is a learned thing.
It will Measure time and growth.
Movement through this journey brings strife.
So the pattern goes.

On and on, highs and lows
disappointment will bring pain.
But You can choose your focous on
Sunshine or the rain.

(So much easier said then done! I know! I hope you are more and more able to see sunshine through the rain. It takes a little practice and sometimes there are even sunshowers, but time will put the memory of this thunderstorm behind you! Sending positive thoughts and sympathy your way.

S.E.)


January 16th, 2016 17:41

Once Upon A Dream
mustofa munir said:

Nice poem.

November 22nd, 2015 20:30

Once Upon A Dream
grange_m said:

Like this,good ending too

November 22nd, 2015 10:57

Inevitable
julesclark71 said:

aahhh sweet very nice

November 21st, 2015 10:56