Comments received on poems by Bloodbat_Workshop
baby bat
sorenbarrett said:
There is a metaphor here and rhyme as well. Not too much darkness though. Very nice
July 19th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
There is a metaphor here and rhyme as well. Not too much darkness though. Very nice
July 19th, 2024 05:41
goth in a box
Weep little lion girl said:
I love this! The rhyming works so well.
July 17th, 2024 20:14
Weep little lion girl said:
I love this! The rhyming works so well.
July 17th, 2024 20:14
monster
Mutley Ravishes said:
There\'s nothing to be afraid of
No need to give the immune system a layoff
Pranayama and retention
Intelligent nutrition
The sunlight\'s vitamin expression
Cold showers and earthing
Make the blood stronger than Kings
July 3rd, 2024 21:25
Mutley Ravishes said:
There\'s nothing to be afraid of
No need to give the immune system a layoff
Pranayama and retention
Intelligent nutrition
The sunlight\'s vitamin expression
Cold showers and earthing
Make the blood stronger than Kings
July 3rd, 2024 21:25
The light
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lol. Bloodbat, the day and the sunlight have always felt nice, you lunar-tic!
July 2nd, 2024 18:31
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lol. Bloodbat, the day and the sunlight have always felt nice, you lunar-tic!
July 2nd, 2024 18:31
Sliver
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'m a sliver of sunlight
I\'m gonna ruin your night
Vampmire!
June 30th, 2024 22:37
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'m a sliver of sunlight
I\'m gonna ruin your night
Vampmire!
June 30th, 2024 22:37
garlic
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lol! By the way,
I heard from someone
The the surface of the sun
Isn\'t hot
Watcha gonna do, Bloodbat Workshop?!
June 16th, 2024 02:01
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lol! By the way,
I heard from someone
The the surface of the sun
Isn\'t hot
Watcha gonna do, Bloodbat Workshop?!
June 16th, 2024 02:01
I miss you
L. B. Mek said:
lol
critics be on heat round here, yikes
what did you to that fool in a past life
you vampire Poet\'s gotta be careful
a trail of jealousy follows you it seems
anyway, ignore the toxic neurotics
thanks for sharing, I think you did well
to imbue intimacy and hurt in your poetic voice
July 28th, 2023 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
lol
critics be on heat round here, yikes
what did you to that fool in a past life
you vampire Poet\'s gotta be careful
a trail of jealousy follows you it seems
anyway, ignore the toxic neurotics
thanks for sharing, I think you did well
to imbue intimacy and hurt in your poetic voice
July 28th, 2023 05:22
I miss you
David Wakeling said:
This is filled with a lot of cliches but hey the rhyme is good.The message is a little annoying.What does I love you forever mean??
July 27th, 2023 17:09
David Wakeling said:
This is filled with a lot of cliches but hey the rhyme is good.The message is a little annoying.What does I love you forever mean??
July 27th, 2023 17:09
only when
L. B. Mek said:
\'You don’t even have to look or research on yahoo\'
genuinely had me lol
a funny vampire, that\'s a deadly combination
who can resist, lol
thanks for the chuckles, just lovely
July 14th, 2023 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'You don’t even have to look or research on yahoo\'
genuinely had me lol
a funny vampire, that\'s a deadly combination
who can resist, lol
thanks for the chuckles, just lovely
July 14th, 2023 04:38
moonlight
L. B. Mek said:
gotta agree that vampire lore
does it for me as well
well, not the extreme stuff
with beetroot juice everywhere
no wait, i\'m revealing too much..
(thanks for sharing)
July 10th, 2023 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
gotta agree that vampire lore
does it for me as well
well, not the extreme stuff
with beetroot juice everywhere
no wait, i\'m revealing too much..
(thanks for sharing)
July 10th, 2023 04:20
Dance with me?
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully vivid,
a slice of life memento worded poetic
thanks for sharing
April 7th, 2023 03:00
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully vivid,
a slice of life memento worded poetic
thanks for sharing
April 7th, 2023 03:00
