Comments received on poems by Kiera
To Swim
L. B. Mek said:
\'wu wei\'
seize control, by going with the flow
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing)
April 14th, 2023 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'wu wei\'
seize control, by going with the flow
(a relatable read, thanks for sharing)
April 14th, 2023 04:04
Yearning
hpoetry said:
This is so well written! I love the start - ‘I see ponds where there are puddles and I see warzones where there are words’ - very abstract but I love the picture you’ve painted and I have to say I feel the same way, if I’m understanding you correctly. I also love the ending, with the heart and brain disagreeing. Great work :)
April 13th, 2023 05:14
hpoetry said:
This is so well written! I love the start - ‘I see ponds where there are puddles and I see warzones where there are words’ - very abstract but I love the picture you’ve painted and I have to say I feel the same way, if I’m understanding you correctly. I also love the ending, with the heart and brain disagreeing. Great work :)
April 13th, 2023 05:14
