Comments received on poems by Sagex0
Teenage mind.
L. B. Mek said:
distancing by reminiscing years
we glorify, those years of youth
that curated all the bulsht, we spend
most of our lives, trying
to recover from
and yet
proximity, removed
we can\'t help, but romanticise
those, first steps
into adulthoods, once seemingly
brilliant, possibilities...
(so forgive us dear poet
we old, has-been\'s
have little left, to do
than look back, and dream
of a Time, free
of our irrevocable short comings)
I pray, your life
may be afforded a kinder fate
so that when you look back
at your footsteps of life
you\'ll be visited by more smiles
than
shoulda, coulda, woulda, regrets
(I wish you all the best!)
May 1st, 2023 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
distancing by reminiscing years
we glorify, those years of youth
that curated all the bulsht, we spend
most of our lives, trying
to recover from
and yet
proximity, removed
we can\'t help, but romanticise
those, first steps
into adulthoods, once seemingly
brilliant, possibilities...
(so forgive us dear poet
we old, has-been\'s
have little left, to do
than look back, and dream
of a Time, free
of our irrevocable short comings)
I pray, your life
may be afforded a kinder fate
so that when you look back
at your footsteps of life
you\'ll be visited by more smiles
than
shoulda, coulda, woulda, regrets
(I wish you all the best!)
May 1st, 2023 05:46