Comments received on poems by Lauren
Broken Mirror
chefeyman said:
I really enjoyed the metaphor. We see mirrors everywhere. You've made me think, and that itself is a gift. Thank you.
December 21st, 2015 00:27
chefeyman said:
I really enjoyed the metaphor. We see mirrors everywhere. You've made me think, and that itself is a gift. Thank you.
December 21st, 2015 00:27
Broken Mirror
Yorke said:
I get what you mean about rhyme, but as a purely therapeutic write, this is excellent! Full of humanity!
It could of course be rewritten, all poetry could, but this is your msg .
December 19th, 2015 18:46
Yorke said:
I get what you mean about rhyme, but as a purely therapeutic write, this is excellent! Full of humanity!
It could of course be rewritten, all poetry could, but this is your msg .
December 19th, 2015 18:46
\"I Haven\'t Shaved My Legs.\"
no_way_back_to said:
the title caught my eye straight away and I like the poem you should keep putting poems up I'll keep my eye out for your next one
December 18th, 2015 21:05
no_way_back_to said:
the title caught my eye straight away and I like the poem you should keep putting poems up I'll keep my eye out for your next one
December 18th, 2015 21:05
\"I Haven\'t Shaved My Legs.\"
no_way_back_to said:
the title caught my eye straight away and I like the poem you should keep putting poems up I'll keep my eye out for your next one
December 18th, 2015 21:01
no_way_back_to said:
the title caught my eye straight away and I like the poem you should keep putting poems up I'll keep my eye out for your next one
December 18th, 2015 21:01
\"I Haven\'t Shaved My Legs.\"
clareb said:
Brings back some very old memories - honest writing and very good description of the emotions such a roller coaster. I'd like to read more
December 18th, 2015 19:46
clareb said:
Brings back some very old memories - honest writing and very good description of the emotions such a roller coaster. I'd like to read more
December 18th, 2015 19:46
\"I Haven\'t Shaved My Legs.\"
Ken said:
Love it! Please share more. Good job! :)
December 17th, 2015 12:23
Ken said:
Love it! Please share more. Good job! :)
December 17th, 2015 12:23
\"I Haven\'t Shaved My Legs.\"
Rooster said:
Well done! Right on and Write On Lillah Jaymas
December 17th, 2015 09:45
Rooster said:
Well done! Right on and Write On Lillah Jaymas
December 17th, 2015 09:45
