Comments received on poems by Lauren



Broken Mirror
chefeyman said:

I really enjoyed the metaphor. We see mirrors everywhere. You've made me think, and that itself is a gift. Thank you.

December 21st, 2015 00:27

Broken Mirror
Yorke said:

I get what you mean about rhyme, but as a purely therapeutic write, this is excellent! Full of humanity!
It could of course be rewritten, all poetry could, but this is your msg .

December 19th, 2015 18:46

\"I Haven\'t Shaved My Legs.\"
no_way_back_to said:

the title caught my eye straight away and I like the poem you should keep putting poems up I'll keep my eye out for your next one

December 18th, 2015 21:05

\"I Haven\'t Shaved My Legs.\"
no_way_back_to said:

the title caught my eye straight away and I like the poem you should keep putting poems up I'll keep my eye out for your next one

December 18th, 2015 21:01

\"I Haven\'t Shaved My Legs.\"
clareb said:

Brings back some very old memories - honest writing and very good description of the emotions such a roller coaster. I'd like to read more

December 18th, 2015 19:46

\"I Haven\'t Shaved My Legs.\"
Ken said:

Love it! Please share more. Good job! :)

December 17th, 2015 12:23

\"I Haven\'t Shaved My Legs.\"
Rooster said:

Well done! Right on and Write On Lillah Jaymas

December 17th, 2015 09:45