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L. B. Mek said:

\'Closing my eyes and you were never there,

But late nights you were the only thing there.\'
this is beautiful poetry
but your last line, detracts from your artistry
you need not explain, what you\'ve worded
with poetic clarity
(just my 2 cents, dear poet
but what do i know
trust in yourself, write how
however and whatever
you want to write)
\'4am,\' they call that \'Tiger hour\'
where a hunter\'s clarity
affords us acute insight

May 19th, 2023 04:04