Comments received on poems by cwhite



A funny thing happened on the way back from Denver
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful utilisation of rage as inspiration
thanks for sharing
(its crazy how common a tale it is
its crazy, how uncommonly we repeat
our mistakes
its crazy, that we\'re driven crazy
by their self-involved, pathetic insignificance
because we chose, to care
because we wanted them to realise
what a gift we made of ourselves
when we chose, them
above our rationality\'s, sense...
oh well, Fck em!
..onwards)

June 2nd, 2023 03:32

Truth
orchidee said:

Good write C.
You a Cat (profile)?! heehee.

June 1st, 2023 01:34

Open your mind
cwhite said:

Thank you so much! I just write them...not sure what different styles there are!

May 31st, 2023 19:41

Open your mind
glorifiedbabysitter said:

This is really amazing I love it. I love how you broke the traditional rhyme scheme and made it unique

May 30th, 2023 19:35