Comments received on poems by cwhite
A funny thing happened on the way back from Denver
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful utilisation of rage as inspiration
thanks for sharing
(its crazy how common a tale it is
its crazy, how uncommonly we repeat
our mistakes
its crazy, that we\'re driven crazy
by their self-involved, pathetic insignificance
because we chose, to care
because we wanted them to realise
what a gift we made of ourselves
when we chose, them
above our rationality\'s, sense...
oh well, Fck em!
..onwards)
June 2nd, 2023 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful utilisation of rage as inspiration
thanks for sharing
(its crazy how common a tale it is
its crazy, how uncommonly we repeat
our mistakes
its crazy, that we\'re driven crazy
by their self-involved, pathetic insignificance
because we chose, to care
because we wanted them to realise
what a gift we made of ourselves
when we chose, them
above our rationality\'s, sense...
oh well, Fck em!
..onwards)
June 2nd, 2023 03:32
Open your mind
cwhite said:
Thank you so much! I just write them...not sure what different styles there are!
May 31st, 2023 19:41
cwhite said:
Thank you so much! I just write them...not sure what different styles there are!
May 31st, 2023 19:41
Open your mind
glorifiedbabysitter said:
This is really amazing I love it. I love how you broke the traditional rhyme scheme and made it unique
May 30th, 2023 19:35
glorifiedbabysitter said:
This is really amazing I love it. I love how you broke the traditional rhyme scheme and made it unique
May 30th, 2023 19:35