Comments received on poems by Melancholic~Onion
What They Omit
TobaniNataiella said:
A complex and very personal poem, beautifully written. It is a hard balance on how to deliver information to young people, you want them to fully understand the real world and all it`s flaws, but equally you do not want them to be scared of it, so some choose on the side of caution and omit the bad bits. Hope you have a good festive few days.
December 21st, 2024 10:42
TobaniNataiella said:
A complex and very personal poem, beautifully written. It is a hard balance on how to deliver information to young people, you want them to fully understand the real world and all it`s flaws, but equally you do not want them to be scared of it, so some choose on the side of caution and omit the bad bits. Hope you have a good festive few days.
December 21st, 2024 10:42
What They Omit
sorenbarrett said:
A very self reflective poem existential in nature and philisophical but so pertinent. It is not just in youth that this occurs and we are told that ignorance of the law is no excuse. Good write
December 21st, 2024 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A very self reflective poem existential in nature and philisophical but so pertinent. It is not just in youth that this occurs and we are told that ignorance of the law is no excuse. Good write
December 21st, 2024 09:09
What They Omit
2781 said:
The fear of the Lord is the beginning of wisdom.
I think that\'s what we are not told
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December 21st, 2024 07:59
2781 said:
The fear of the Lord is the beginning of wisdom.
I think that\'s what we are not told
X
December 21st, 2024 07:59
What Is LOVE? Part.1
TobaniNataiella said:
A very interesting read about the most written about subject in poetry, i am sure there will be many opinions on this, personally i enjoyed reading this, well written.
December 19th, 2024 22:30
TobaniNataiella said:
A very interesting read about the most written about subject in poetry, i am sure there will be many opinions on this, personally i enjoyed reading this, well written.
December 19th, 2024 22:30
What Is LOVE? Part.1
sorenbarrett said:
A valid point in that love is too amorphous a word to define, It means so many different things to so many people in different situations. Love lol the poem
December 19th, 2024 18:21
sorenbarrett said:
A valid point in that love is too amorphous a word to define, It means so many different things to so many people in different situations. Love lol the poem
December 19th, 2024 18:21
What Is LOVE? Part.1
Doggerel Dave said:
You will find full on support for these propositions from me spread across these pages. Please feel free to get back if you would like references.
Great work.
December 19th, 2024 16:44
Doggerel Dave said:
You will find full on support for these propositions from me spread across these pages. Please feel free to get back if you would like references.
Great work.
December 19th, 2024 16:44
I Forgot The Way You Were
Cassie58 said:
A tribute to the wonderful world of books. No need to feel lonely when you have a book to curl up with. Much enjoyed lines. Thank you.
December 18th, 2024 10:48
Cassie58 said:
A tribute to the wonderful world of books. No need to feel lonely when you have a book to curl up with. Much enjoyed lines. Thank you.
December 18th, 2024 10:48
I Forgot The Way You Were
sorenbarrett said:
Books are old friends. A lovely write and tribute to them. I love the way you use the word forgot and how in returning to it again and again you emphasize that you have not.
December 18th, 2024 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Books are old friends. A lovely write and tribute to them. I love the way you use the word forgot and how in returning to it again and again you emphasize that you have not.
December 18th, 2024 08:57
I Forgot The Way You Were
TobaniNataiella said:
A lovely homage to the beauty and value of words, Really like this
December 18th, 2024 05:26
TobaniNataiella said:
A lovely homage to the beauty and value of words, Really like this
December 18th, 2024 05:26
SongsThatMakeMeFeelAlive
Kevin Hulme said:
If ‘Dancing Queen’ by ABBA comes on the Radio, it’s one song I can’t turn off.
All your daily Vitamins in that one Track.
December 17th, 2024 20:03
Kevin Hulme said:
If ‘Dancing Queen’ by ABBA comes on the Radio, it’s one song I can’t turn off.
All your daily Vitamins in that one Track.
December 17th, 2024 20:03
SongsThatMakeMeFeelAlive
Ladywithaquill said:
\"I flit through the despairing library I call a brain\" - this line is amazing. Sometimes the unwritten words are emotions that cannot be described but only experienced, and this poem definitely revoked those feelings of listening to the most perfect songs.
December 17th, 2024 19:41
Ladywithaquill said:
\"I flit through the despairing library I call a brain\" - this line is amazing. Sometimes the unwritten words are emotions that cannot be described but only experienced, and this poem definitely revoked those feelings of listening to the most perfect songs.
December 17th, 2024 19:41
SongsThatMakeMeFeelAlive
Doggerel Dave said:
‘the words of an angsty teenager’ made sense to me at the other end of the life cycle. Yes, over the course of a long life I’ve happened across a couple of songs which spoke of what was a truth to me. And let me be argumentative from the start - you are good with words....
I hope you can feel at home at MPS. It is interactive, so do respond to others work and accept responses to your own. Take care.
December 17th, 2024 17:21
Doggerel Dave said:
‘the words of an angsty teenager’ made sense to me at the other end of the life cycle. Yes, over the course of a long life I’ve happened across a couple of songs which spoke of what was a truth to me. And let me be argumentative from the start - you are good with words....
I hope you can feel at home at MPS. It is interactive, so do respond to others work and accept responses to your own. Take care.
December 17th, 2024 17:21
