Comments received on poems by Melancholic~Onion
I Forgot The Way You Were
Cassie58 said:
A tribute to the wonderful world of books. No need to feel lonely when you have a book to curl up with. Much enjoyed lines. Thank you.
December 18th, 2024 10:48
Cassie58 said:
A tribute to the wonderful world of books. No need to feel lonely when you have a book to curl up with. Much enjoyed lines. Thank you.
December 18th, 2024 10:48
I Forgot The Way You Were
sorenbarrett said:
Books are old friends. A lovely write and tribute to them. I love the way you use the word forgot and how in returning to it again and again you emphasize that you have not.
December 18th, 2024 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Books are old friends. A lovely write and tribute to them. I love the way you use the word forgot and how in returning to it again and again you emphasize that you have not.
December 18th, 2024 08:57
I Forgot The Way You Were
TobaniNataiella said:
A lovely homage to the beauty and value of words, Really like this
December 18th, 2024 05:26
TobaniNataiella said:
A lovely homage to the beauty and value of words, Really like this
December 18th, 2024 05:26
SongsThatMakeMeFeelAlive
Kevin Hulme said:
If ‘Dancing Queen’ by ABBA comes on the Radio, it’s one song I can’t turn off.
All your daily Vitamins in that one Track.
December 17th, 2024 20:03
Kevin Hulme said:
If ‘Dancing Queen’ by ABBA comes on the Radio, it’s one song I can’t turn off.
All your daily Vitamins in that one Track.
December 17th, 2024 20:03
SongsThatMakeMeFeelAlive
Ladywithaquill said:
\"I flit through the despairing library I call a brain\" - this line is amazing. Sometimes the unwritten words are emotions that cannot be described but only experienced, and this poem definitely revoked those feelings of listening to the most perfect songs.
December 17th, 2024 19:41
Ladywithaquill said:
\"I flit through the despairing library I call a brain\" - this line is amazing. Sometimes the unwritten words are emotions that cannot be described but only experienced, and this poem definitely revoked those feelings of listening to the most perfect songs.
December 17th, 2024 19:41
SongsThatMakeMeFeelAlive
Doggerel Dave said:
‘the words of an angsty teenager’ made sense to me at the other end of the life cycle. Yes, over the course of a long life I’ve happened across a couple of songs which spoke of what was a truth to me. And let me be argumentative from the start - you are good with words....
I hope you can feel at home at MPS. It is interactive, so do respond to others work and accept responses to your own. Take care.
December 17th, 2024 17:21
Doggerel Dave said:
‘the words of an angsty teenager’ made sense to me at the other end of the life cycle. Yes, over the course of a long life I’ve happened across a couple of songs which spoke of what was a truth to me. And let me be argumentative from the start - you are good with words....
I hope you can feel at home at MPS. It is interactive, so do respond to others work and accept responses to your own. Take care.
December 17th, 2024 17:21
