Comments received on poems by Ferro_gene_ous



JUST LIKE THAT
L. B. Mek said:

they placed their bets, chose
to believe in a green, other
unguaranteed
so be it then, let them swim
in those shark waters
we know who we be, we\'ve
bled before, nothing new
learnt, to swim in shallow rivers
instead
where their plenty of fish, that await
...
lol
(wonderful flow and worded
so relatable, thanks for sharing)

June 30th, 2023 06:49