Comments received on poems by FallenAngel1
Complete and total enlightenment(part 1)
sorenbarrett said:
It is a knotty problem I\'ve tried to untie it but it remains tangled. A good write
July 25th, 2025 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
It is a knotty problem I\'ve tried to untie it but it remains tangled. A good write
July 25th, 2025 20:43
A day-dream
Poetic Licence said:
That is a clever write, that only a dreamer will truly understand, wonderful, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
That is a clever write, that only a dreamer will truly understand, wonderful, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 05:36
A day-dream
sorenbarrett said:
In four lines and rhyme you have encapsulated the day dreamer. Brilliant! and far deeper than its surface appearance. The rhyme is catchy but the day dreamer may not accomplish much and live in worldly rags but sits on a throne in his dreams. Is the mental state of mind more valuable than the gold of this world? Only the dreamer can tell. Loved it and a fave
July 24th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
In four lines and rhyme you have encapsulated the day dreamer. Brilliant! and far deeper than its surface appearance. The rhyme is catchy but the day dreamer may not accomplish much and live in worldly rags but sits on a throne in his dreams. Is the mental state of mind more valuable than the gold of this world? Only the dreamer can tell. Loved it and a fave
July 24th, 2025 04:05
Its Been Too Long
Lei said:
I hope you get all your poems back and I wish you the best of luck
April 7th, 2024 14:24
Lei said:
I hope you get all your poems back and I wish you the best of luck
April 7th, 2024 14:24
