Comments received on poems by sonal monhyung
What will beyond today
sonal monhyung said:
Thanks to give sometime on my poetry ! I have written what I had felt back in days . I appreciate you like my thoughts.
September 22nd, 2023 09:24
sonal monhyung said:
Thanks to give sometime on my poetry ! I have written what I had felt back in days . I appreciate you like my thoughts.
September 22nd, 2023 09:24
What will beyond today
L. B. Mek said:
schedule our alarm\'s mood swings
cushion life with soft hobbies
then a needle bursts our tyre
we\'ve never driven only dreamt
expectation fuelled by imagery
self a paradox between, selfhood
and what society expects
Do we live tomorrow
is Today a past we live
How much of past
is curated by tomorrow\'s, perspective
...
\'Today will lead to future
With those works , I did today !
So, when I know what leads to tomorrow;
Then, I know what will be beyond today .\'
(Brilliant!
that meandering poetic voice
that searching ink
distilling a mindset of impatience
a need to feel some control, in life
lazy in style, yet intensely focused
such a great read
Virginia Wolf would have loved this
I like to think,
thank you for sharing.
love your unique style, dear poet
September 22nd, 2023 02:21
L. B. Mek said:
schedule our alarm\'s mood swings
cushion life with soft hobbies
then a needle bursts our tyre
we\'ve never driven only dreamt
expectation fuelled by imagery
self a paradox between, selfhood
and what society expects
Do we live tomorrow
is Today a past we live
How much of past
is curated by tomorrow\'s, perspective
...
\'Today will lead to future
With those works , I did today !
So, when I know what leads to tomorrow;
Then, I know what will be beyond today .\'
(Brilliant!
that meandering poetic voice
that searching ink
distilling a mindset of impatience
a need to feel some control, in life
lazy in style, yet intensely focused
such a great read
Virginia Wolf would have loved this
I like to think,
thank you for sharing.
love your unique style, dear poet
September 22nd, 2023 02:21
Lost friendship
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Lost friendship” by Sonal Monhyung
There is something sadder that lost friendship. It is that friendship that we make online and we will most probably never meet with the person in person. The day will come when we will stop using the computer and mobile and stop surfing the Internet. Our messages and poems will remain in virtual archives. Perhaps one day those archives will become too heavy and will be shunted to some other place on servers. On one site I have seen a member whose page shows thousands of messages sent and received, and has written hundreds of poems, but only one poem currently appears. There might be a button that says “Show older” That is what happens over time : older messages, older poems, older members…
“Ships that pass in the night and speak each other in passing,
Only a signal shown and a distant voice in the darkness;
So on the ocean of life, we pass and speak one another,
Only a look and a voice, then darkness again and a silence.”
--H. W. Longfellow 1817-1882)
Imagine you are on a ship in the vastness of the ocean. Another ship goes by. You see someone. A smile, a wave of the hand… Soon the ship moves off... You will lose that companion forever…
Soman Ragavan. 19 September, 2023
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September 19th, 2023 07:31
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Lost friendship” by Sonal Monhyung
There is something sadder that lost friendship. It is that friendship that we make online and we will most probably never meet with the person in person. The day will come when we will stop using the computer and mobile and stop surfing the Internet. Our messages and poems will remain in virtual archives. Perhaps one day those archives will become too heavy and will be shunted to some other place on servers. On one site I have seen a member whose page shows thousands of messages sent and received, and has written hundreds of poems, but only one poem currently appears. There might be a button that says “Show older” That is what happens over time : older messages, older poems, older members…
“Ships that pass in the night and speak each other in passing,
Only a signal shown and a distant voice in the darkness;
So on the ocean of life, we pass and speak one another,
Only a look and a voice, then darkness again and a silence.”
--H. W. Longfellow 1817-1882)
Imagine you are on a ship in the vastness of the ocean. Another ship goes by. You see someone. A smile, a wave of the hand… Soon the ship moves off... You will lose that companion forever…
Soman Ragavan. 19 September, 2023
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September 19th, 2023 07:31
Inner sound - ll ( A broken heart )
Soman Ragavan said:
To : shruti14 (Mayekar)
Sonal Monhyung
Adventuressmalik
Vani Bhasin
Nicky
Illusions
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Please read my poem \"At Nizzamudin Bridge, a grieving father.\"
Soman Ragavan. 15.9.2023
September 15th, 2023 07:38
Soman Ragavan said:
To : shruti14 (Mayekar)
Sonal Monhyung
Adventuressmalik
Vani Bhasin
Nicky
Illusions
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Please read my poem \"At Nizzamudin Bridge, a grieving father.\"
Soman Ragavan. 15.9.2023
September 15th, 2023 07:38
One\'s nation
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand you are twelve, so by rights I should leave you alone and let you find out about life in your own time.
Just like to mention that it isn\'t essential that you love your country. you might manage to become a citizen of the world...
September 13th, 2023 04:31
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand you are twelve, so by rights I should leave you alone and let you find out about life in your own time.
Just like to mention that it isn\'t essential that you love your country. you might manage to become a citizen of the world...
September 13th, 2023 04:31
Inner sound - ll ( A broken heart )
sonal monhyung said:
Can you share it with me ?
September 4th, 2023 09:04
sonal monhyung said:
Can you share it with me ?
September 4th, 2023 09:04
Inner sound - ll ( A broken heart )
sonal monhyung said:
Well ! I\'ll see this . Thanks for comment me !
September 4th, 2023 09:04
sonal monhyung said:
Well ! I\'ll see this . Thanks for comment me !
September 4th, 2023 09:04
Inner sound - ll ( A broken heart )
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see the poem “The Indian soldiers” by “Nature” and my comments.
Soman Ragavan. 3 September, 2023 //
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September 3rd, 2023 07:32
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see the poem “The Indian soldiers” by “Nature” and my comments.
Soman Ragavan. 3 September, 2023 //
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September 3rd, 2023 07:32
Real life animation
sonal monhyung said:
Thanks ! for your valuable time you gave my poetry. It means a lot to me .
August 8th, 2023 10:03
sonal monhyung said:
Thanks ! for your valuable time you gave my poetry. It means a lot to me .
August 8th, 2023 10:03
Real life animation
Sunsetmet said:
Deeply written and true what\'s animated truly related true friendship and what a journey to remake read my Orient one thanks
August 8th, 2023 09:18
Sunsetmet said:
Deeply written and true what\'s animated truly related true friendship and what a journey to remake read my Orient one thanks
August 8th, 2023 09:18
Month of july
sonal monhyung said:
Now it\'s time to enjoy August with more fun . Thanks for your words o .
August 6th, 2023 15:58
sonal monhyung said:
Now it\'s time to enjoy August with more fun . Thanks for your words o .
August 6th, 2023 15:58
Palace of beauty and love (The Taj )
sonal monhyung said:
Thank you! for your lovely words. I\'ll surely read your poem .
July 25th, 2023 06:46
sonal monhyung said:
Thank you! for your lovely words. I\'ll surely read your poem .
July 25th, 2023 06:46
Palace of beauty and love (The Taj )
Soman Ragavan said:
Dear Sonal, I have Liked your poem. I, too, have written a poem on the Taj Mahal.It is called \"A marvel in marble.\" It appears on allpoetry.com It will appear later here on mypoeticside.com Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 24 July, 2023.//
July 24th, 2023 11:14
Soman Ragavan said:
Dear Sonal, I have Liked your poem. I, too, have written a poem on the Taj Mahal.It is called \"A marvel in marble.\" It appears on allpoetry.com It will appear later here on mypoeticside.com Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 24 July, 2023.//
July 24th, 2023 11:14
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