Comments received on poems by Wyster



unraveling
Natalie Gladmir said:

Our life is eternal, death is the exit of the soul from the body shell, and then its transition to the subtle world. I think so.

December 5th, 2023 16:37

Unlovable
Star hunter said:

Beautiful words

July 10th, 2023 16:06

Alcoholic Blasphemy
2781 said:

Shal the companions make a banquet of him? shall they part him among the merchants?

July 6th, 2023 09:37

Mistakes
Neville said:


feels like a delicious invitation wrapped safely and tightly within the folds of a satin boa-constrictor .. and muchly enjoyed .. Neville

July 5th, 2023 03:56

You are...
Neville said:


I am delighted to have tasted your ink here for the first time .. it was muchly enjoyed .. welcome to MPS and be happy here ... Neville

July 5th, 2023 03:53

ZzZzZ
peto said:

Good night
Great write
The rhyme and flow are bang on point
Smashing read


July 3rd, 2023 09:20

A long, long journey
L. B. Mek said:

that mirror of self worth
unearthed when that fog
of self hate, is cleared
when we change our environment
allowing us to breath, free
of comparisons and those toxic
influences in our lives...
(more power to you! dear Phoenix poet
soar high n free, butterfly
ink your truth loud n proud)
I am a witness to your
survival fight and triumph
over all the obstacles
in your way, stay strong!

July 3rd, 2023 03:36