Comments received on poems by Ethan Mikel St.Amour



Are we alien?
sorenbarrett said:

Our shrines of honor but empty words drunk on greed we are imprisoned by our shame. Well written

May 16th, 2026 04:23

Terror
sorenbarrett said:

A senryu of fear and terror. It is dark and well done

May 15th, 2026 13:39

Death
sorenbarrett said:

Lines that leave the mind to wonder. Nicely done

May 13th, 2026 17:37

Dragon Skin
sorenbarrett said:

A fantasy haiku with mythical proportions

May 12th, 2026 23:27

Drifting away
Friendship said:

nicely worded

May 7th, 2026 11:01

Drifting away
sorenbarrett said:

A metaphoric senryu well done

May 7th, 2026 04:23

Drifting away
ms.divine said:

Up lift your self listen to something motivational to get outah that funk you in 🫂🖖🏿love and light

May 7th, 2026 00:27

Cobra
sorenbarrett said:

A fabulous haiku that paints its picture well in reality as well as metaphor

May 5th, 2026 03:48

Churning Love
sorenbarrett said:

Ethan this is a most wonderful senryu very well done

May 4th, 2026 13:07

Churning Love
Friendship said:

It speaks of pain to me. Nicely said

May 4th, 2026 11:02

Working Man
sorenbarrett said:

An image created of exhaustion

April 21st, 2026 21:15

Death
sorenbarrett said:

A chilling senryu that speaks of impending death. Nicely said

April 13th, 2026 04:27

Frozen cloud along the swamp
sorenbarrett said:

A very nice haiku well done

February 26th, 2026 22:07

Withering away
Just Kate said:

Dirty hands and face
Hard work all these years gone by
Hide the scars of his

No disrespect to you either. I think one poem a day is not nearly enough, (especially when there are people like you who are so talented) so I wanted to add on and play along. :)


February 13th, 2026 11:31

Shes at the club
Just Kate said:

She awakens next
Wrapped tightly in your embrace
Starts her walk of shame.

No disrespect. Just wanted to play and keep it going.

February 13th, 2026 11:21

Gone too soon
Just Kate said:

Sad and beautifully written at the same time. My heart breaks for you.

February 13th, 2026 11:16

Jealousy
Just Kate said:

Beautiful yet heartbreaking. I hope this isn\'t from experience...

February 13th, 2026 11:12

Withering away
sorenbarrett said:

What a wonderful senryu a fave

February 6th, 2026 04:03

The sun is crying
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful Haiku that shines bright indeed

February 1st, 2026 20:31

One day
sorenbarrett said:

This senryu seems to reflect both a temporal and spiritual meaning. Is she waiting beyond for the reunion and home is where one came from and loved ones await? Well written Ethan

January 11th, 2026 04:03

Gone too soon
sorenbarrett said:

The expression of recognition of loss of the familiar and comfortable leaving a tone of sadness to this piece. Nicely done

January 6th, 2026 04:16

Jealousy
sorenbarrett said:

A great senryu words well worked. Loved it

January 5th, 2026 03:48

Shes at the club
Friendship said:

nicely done.

January 2nd, 2026 08:08

what would you do?
sorenbarrett said:

A strong message in this poetic senryu that is reflective and asks another to be so as well. Very nicely written

January 2nd, 2026 03:25

On fire
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful senryu in these few powerful words. Well done

December 30th, 2025 04:57

Horrid
sorenbarrett said:

This one gets a fave not for its beauty but for its unique use of smell in a senryu and its clever word play combining smell with emotion. In its repulsion it vividly displays its power. Well done.

December 30th, 2025 04:09

Loving on you
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely senryu of a most sensual nature. Lovely

December 22nd, 2025 03:55

Maneater
sorenbarrett said:

This poem brings to mind a song from the past that I can not quite place the name of. A very descriptive write

December 20th, 2025 03:40

Archangels kingdom
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting set of images in this write. Mind provoking

December 17th, 2025 03:51

Waiting and watching
sorenbarrett said:

There is a haunting feel of worry, angst and concern in this poem. Those waiting hours where there is nothing to do but think and thoughts do not come only anxiety that there are no thoughts.

December 13th, 2025 04:41

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