Comments received on poems by Ethan Mikel St.Amour



Accident
sorenbarrett said:

This is one that gets a visceral and knee jerk reaction of withdrawal since I know that smell. Well done

October 1st, 2026 03:50

Bipolar
sorenbarrett said:

Overly emotional can be a problem in a crowded society. A roller-coaster of emotions can be a wild ride that others outside do not understand and may get in the way of. Nicely written

September 30th, 2026 03:52

The Attic
sorenbarrett said:

Spooky, eerie, dark and well imaged it speaks out of the surreal. Nicely done

September 28th, 2026 04:30

The Mirror
Paul Bell said:

Yes, sometimes when you look in, the reflection isn\'t you.
You walk away, but the person looking back doesn\'t leave.



September 27th, 2026 15:20

The Mirror
sorenbarrett said:

I am familiar with indelible ink but indelible reflections are a new thing to me and as a metaphor the smile is either reassuring or creepy I can not decide which. Well done my friend

September 27th, 2026 04:06

The Photograph
sorenbarrett said:

A twilight zone moment in a picture and poem. Nicely depicted as frozen in time.

September 27th, 2026 03:50

A Wish Beneath a Dying Sun
Mutley Ravishes said:

It never stops shining. Not even for a second! Great write.

September 25th, 2026 19:59

A Wish Beneath a Dying Sun
sorenbarrett said:

It is the last stanza that gets the fave in this poem. Both poetic and metaphoric it sends a powerful message. Nicely done

September 25th, 2026 08:46

What am I? Who am I?
sorenbarrett said:

Philosophical, existential and a poetic question. Nicely written

September 24th, 2026 03:52

Mimic
sorenbarrett said:

Haunting and eerie it calls out of the darkness. Well done

September 23rd, 2026 10:51

Light Doesn\'t Ask Permission
sorenbarrett said:

I loved the poetic nature of this poem, short and sweet with a sense of personification to the light itself. Very nicely done and a fave.

September 23rd, 2026 04:06

Serial Killer
Friendship said:

Nicely done

September 18th, 2026 08:03

Serial Killer
sorenbarrett said:

Cold and chilling (no pun intended) this poem is a snapshot of a person devoid of normal empathy. Well written

September 18th, 2026 04:13

where are you my love
Soman Ragavan said:

Three lines that convey the solitude, the despondency.... The poem speaks of burial, of the end of life, of the paradox of love causing pain.

September 17th, 2026 11:08

Misery
Soman Ragavan said:

\"I miss misery...\" This is like Byron\'s poem \"The Prisoner of Chillon,\" a dungeon in Switzerland where prisoners were kept. The speaker in the poem said that he finally found the jail a good place.

September 17th, 2026 11:06

No chains left
Soman Ragavan said:

Clinging to life is the most prevalent of human conditions. It is the one thing that enables us to live on, to face off challenges. Life preservation is at the root of survival.

September 17th, 2026 11:03

Purple Starlight
Soman Ragavan said:

Insomnia is the lot of poets. Perhaps it has to do with the hyperactive poetic mind. Love of nature comes naturally to poets. In nature do they often find inspiration to write.

September 17th, 2026 11:00

Inside The Madness
Friendship said:

Well written. Your poem explores the internal struggle of self-identity and morality.

September 16th, 2026 08:44

Inside The Madness
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write with good meter and rhyme that asks a question and it is that final question at the end of the poem that gives it power. Well done

September 16th, 2026 05:03

ADHD Is My Devil
sorenbarrett said:

There seem to be feelings of agitation and distraction reported in this write where the author interprets it as a self psychosis. Although it may feel so more likely attentional problems. Nicely written

September 15th, 2026 04:33

Fear Beneath My Skin
sorenbarrett said:

This one is chilling and haunting it evokes fear from the setting added to by the repetitious single word rhymes coming in fours. Bone chilling and well done it sends its message well.

September 14th, 2026 04:33

Green Scars Cover My Soul
sorenbarrett said:

Pictures of nature fill this poem of love. If only we loved nature enough to respect it. Well done

September 14th, 2026 03:54

One More Flight
sorenbarrett said:

A mythic creature imaged in this poem and one must ask is there deeper meaning and as in all myths there is meaning beneath its skin. Well done

September 12th, 2026 04:17

Love like Lavender Thorns
sorenbarrett said:

This write evokes feelings of suffering and injury in the midst of beauty. A sacred sacrifice comes to mind. Well done

September 11th, 2026 04:18

Sand Walkers
sorenbarrett said:

Metaphor in a haiku. Well done

September 10th, 2026 04:05

Purple Starlight
sorenbarrett said:

In a poem so short such intricate rhyme is rare. The interplay of rhyme between the first and second line gets the fave. Beside this the imagery is lovely and I too love night\'s indigo

September 10th, 2026 03:55

Pyschopath
sorenbarrett said:

Chilling and sad for we all have deficits, hard to have no feelings. Well written

September 9th, 2026 04:36

They wear my face
turningpoint said:

awesome well said

September 6th, 2026 14:18

They wear my face
arqios said:

Love the interaction of the title with the \'their\' slash \"they\'re\" me and the hard-hitting truth behind the👍🏻🕊️dubious duplicity (dublicity?) thoroughly enjoyed. \'

September 6th, 2026 06:36

They wear my face
sorenbarrett said:

Fake it until you can make it comes to mind. A short but a write that requires thought.

September 6th, 2026 04:59

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