Comments received on poems by Ethan Mikel St.Amour



Broken Warriors
sorenbarrett said:

Now that is a question that needs no further explanation. Well written

May 17th, 2026 16:49

Are we alien?
Friendship said:

Nicely said

May 16th, 2026 14:49

Are we alien?
sorenbarrett said:

Our shrines of honor but empty words drunk on greed we are imprisoned by our shame. Well written

May 16th, 2026 04:23

Terror
sorenbarrett said:

A senryu of fear and terror. It is dark and well done

May 15th, 2026 13:39

Death
sorenbarrett said:

Lines that leave the mind to wonder. Nicely done

May 13th, 2026 17:37

Dragon Skin
sorenbarrett said:

A fantasy haiku with mythical proportions

May 12th, 2026 23:27

Drifting away
Friendship said:

nicely worded

May 7th, 2026 11:01

Drifting away
sorenbarrett said:

A metaphoric senryu well done

May 7th, 2026 04:23

Drifting away
ms.divine said:

Up lift your self listen to something motivational to get outah that funk you in 🫂🖖🏿love and light

May 7th, 2026 00:27

Cobra
sorenbarrett said:

A fabulous haiku that paints its picture well in reality as well as metaphor

May 5th, 2026 03:48

Churning Love
sorenbarrett said:

Ethan this is a most wonderful senryu very well done

May 4th, 2026 13:07

Churning Love
Friendship said:

It speaks of pain to me. Nicely said

May 4th, 2026 11:02

Working Man
sorenbarrett said:

An image created of exhaustion

April 21st, 2026 21:15

Death
sorenbarrett said:

A chilling senryu that speaks of impending death. Nicely said

April 13th, 2026 04:27

Frozen cloud along the swamp
sorenbarrett said:

A very nice haiku well done

February 26th, 2026 22:07

Withering away
Just Kate said:

Dirty hands and face
Hard work all these years gone by
Hide the scars of his

No disrespect to you either. I think one poem a day is not nearly enough, (especially when there are people like you who are so talented) so I wanted to add on and play along. :)


February 13th, 2026 11:31

Shes at the club
Just Kate said:

She awakens next
Wrapped tightly in your embrace
Starts her walk of shame.

No disrespect. Just wanted to play and keep it going.

February 13th, 2026 11:21

Gone too soon
Just Kate said:

Sad and beautifully written at the same time. My heart breaks for you.

February 13th, 2026 11:16

Jealousy
Just Kate said:

Beautiful yet heartbreaking. I hope this isn\'t from experience...

February 13th, 2026 11:12

Withering away
sorenbarrett said:

What a wonderful senryu a fave

February 6th, 2026 04:03

The sun is crying
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful Haiku that shines bright indeed

February 1st, 2026 20:31

One day
sorenbarrett said:

This senryu seems to reflect both a temporal and spiritual meaning. Is she waiting beyond for the reunion and home is where one came from and loved ones await? Well written Ethan

January 11th, 2026 04:03

Gone too soon
sorenbarrett said:

The expression of recognition of loss of the familiar and comfortable leaving a tone of sadness to this piece. Nicely done

January 6th, 2026 04:16

Jealousy
sorenbarrett said:

A great senryu words well worked. Loved it

January 5th, 2026 03:48

Shes at the club
Friendship said:

nicely done.

January 2nd, 2026 08:08

what would you do?
sorenbarrett said:

A strong message in this poetic senryu that is reflective and asks another to be so as well. Very nicely written

January 2nd, 2026 03:25

On fire
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful senryu in these few powerful words. Well done

December 30th, 2025 04:57

Horrid
sorenbarrett said:

This one gets a fave not for its beauty but for its unique use of smell in a senryu and its clever word play combining smell with emotion. In its repulsion it vividly displays its power. Well done.

December 30th, 2025 04:09

Loving on you
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely senryu of a most sensual nature. Lovely

December 22nd, 2025 03:55

Maneater
sorenbarrett said:

This poem brings to mind a song from the past that I can not quite place the name of. A very descriptive write

December 20th, 2025 03:40

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