Comments received on poems by Ethan Mikel St.Amour



One More Flight
sorenbarrett said:

A mythic creature imaged in this poem and one must ask is there deeper meaning and as in all myths there is meaning beneath its skin. Well done

September 12th, 2026 04:17

Love like Lavender Thorns
sorenbarrett said:

This write evokes feelings of suffering and injury in the midst of beauty. A sacred sacrifice comes to mind. Well done

September 11th, 2026 04:18

Sand Walkers
sorenbarrett said:

Metaphor in a haiku. Well done

September 10th, 2026 04:05

Purple Starlight
sorenbarrett said:

In a poem so short such intricate rhyme is rare. The interplay of rhyme between the first and second line gets the fave. Beside this the imagery is lovely and I too love night\'s indigo

September 10th, 2026 03:55

Pyschopath
sorenbarrett said:

Chilling and sad for we all have deficits, hard to have no feelings. Well written

September 9th, 2026 04:36

They wear my face
turningpoint said:

awesome well said

September 6th, 2026 14:18

They wear my face
arqios said:

Love the interaction of the title with the \'their\' slash \"they\'re\" me and the hard-hitting truth behind the👍🏻🕊️dubious duplicity (dublicity?) thoroughly enjoyed. \'

September 6th, 2026 06:36

They wear my face
sorenbarrett said:

Fake it until you can make it comes to mind. A short but a write that requires thought.

September 6th, 2026 04:59

No chains left
sorenbarrett said:

This one fit well the picture and the feeling of fighting for one\'s life and the refusal to give up. Nicely stated

September 6th, 2026 04:34

Hold me like im gone
sorenbarrett said:

A senryu of resignation to exhaustion well done

August 20th, 2026 03:51

damaged
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting write where emotion serves as the bread with a pain killer and numbing agent as the meat of the sandwich. Thought provoking.

August 19th, 2026 04:23

Woven in light
sorenbarrett said:

This short poem gave me much thought. All being composed of waves that are in constant motion the spinning and twirling and to those that believe in souls or under what definition one constitutes a soul such waves may transcend dimensions of reality. Well done

August 17th, 2026 04:22

where are you my love
sorenbarrett said:

An amputation of faith is a strong pain indeed. Nicely written

August 15th, 2026 11:42

Gazing
sorenbarrett said:

Short and a question of timing. Nicely said

August 11th, 2026 12:30

Alone
sorenbarrett said:

The need for someone and support in an hour of being overwhelmed. Nicely written

August 4th, 2026 03:18

Misery
sorenbarrett said:

A magnificent senryu well crafted to capture the psychology of a self made martyr. Nicely done a fave

July 9th, 2026 04:33

Valhalla
sorenbarrett said:

A most classic look through the eyes of a senryu Well done

June 19th, 2026 11:15

My Love
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the senryu very descriptive and nicely worded. A fave

June 16th, 2026 03:37

sin of wrath
Friendship said:

good write

May 31st, 2026 19:34

sin of wrath
sorenbarrett said:

A powerful senryu and well written

May 31st, 2026 13:57

Broken Warriors
sorenbarrett said:

Now that is a question that needs no further explanation. Well written

May 17th, 2026 16:49

Are we alien?
Friendship said:

Nicely said

May 16th, 2026 14:49

Are we alien?
sorenbarrett said:

Our shrines of honor but empty words drunk on greed we are imprisoned by our shame. Well written

May 16th, 2026 04:23

Terror
sorenbarrett said:

A senryu of fear and terror. It is dark and well done

May 15th, 2026 13:39

Death
sorenbarrett said:

Lines that leave the mind to wonder. Nicely done

May 13th, 2026 17:37

Dragon Skin
sorenbarrett said:

A fantasy haiku with mythical proportions

May 12th, 2026 23:27

Drifting away
Friendship said:

nicely worded

May 7th, 2026 11:01

Drifting away
sorenbarrett said:

A metaphoric senryu well done

May 7th, 2026 04:23

Drifting away
ms.divine said:

Up lift your self listen to something motivational to get outah that funk you in 🫂🖖🏿love and light

May 7th, 2026 00:27

Cobra
sorenbarrett said:

A fabulous haiku that paints its picture well in reality as well as metaphor

May 5th, 2026 03:48

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