Comments received on poems by asiya ˚ʚ♡ɞ˚



Stolen Bliss
L. B. Mek said:

Gaia, I suspect
rejoices
that it\'s no longer
a man\'s world
let our sister\'s reign
supreme
may the healing begin
(don\'t believe everything you hear
and read, young poet
there\'s more to empowering a lady
than fuelling hate for all the men
in the world, indeed
we men have a lot to answer for
but some of us, are worth
giving a chance)
shine bright, soar high
don\'t be tainted by hate
so early in your journey
it\'s a truly corrosive trait
you\'re best to discard
before it\'s too late
(but what do i know)
do you!
(thanks for sharing your art)

July 7th, 2023 05:48