Comments received on poems by poesia



hopeless romantic
L. B. Mek said:

a lovely write
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my feeble poetic reply below:
(pulsing at our exchange rate
we bid for a stake in love
shares we\'re afforded, by fate
some last a while, others
we quickly liquidate and reinvest
all in our search for that
one, investment profile we connect
with like none other, knowing
for every penny we invest
our dividends will continue
to double, for life
that\'s that love: innate
we all dream about...)

July 21st, 2023 05:23

my emotions are strangers
L. B. Mek said:

eventually we become numb to our pain
this, a mercy we\'re afforded
but still, it hurts
and it can take a while for us to move on
till then we\'re lucky to express it
in our scribbles
most have to simply repress it..

July 21st, 2023 05:08