Comments received on poems by Hayley Brown
Casually Unhinged
vicecream said:
I understood it very clearly good job Hayley let it out girl!
August 7th, 2023 22:04
vicecream said:
I understood it very clearly good job Hayley let it out girl!
August 7th, 2023 22:04
Casually Unhinged
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but because there are no names for the characters the reader is not engaged.It is impossible to guess who is talking to whom and why
August 7th, 2023 18:19
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but because there are no names for the characters the reader is not engaged.It is impossible to guess who is talking to whom and why
August 7th, 2023 18:19
