Comments received on poems by HoboBilbo
(—) | I can\'t think of a title, but I will be accepting to recommendations.
2781 said:
Ask for it.
April 26th, 2024 23:31
2781 said:
Ask for it.
April 26th, 2024 23:31
The name of that —: Dr. Kri‐
HoboBilbo said:
If you do not see this as a poem that deserves any form of respect, uproar, etcetera, or anything else - do explain this to me in forms of criticism.
April 26th, 2024 16:20
HoboBilbo said:
If you do not see this as a poem that deserves any form of respect, uproar, etcetera, or anything else - do explain this to me in forms of criticism.
April 26th, 2024 16:20
It was Inspired by Abominable Television
HoboBilbo said:
I wrote a better story about a week before this one, but alas - it got lost. I posted the aforementioned story to an \'introduce yourself\' and—because it wasn\'t directly about me—one of the editors deleted it. I know it was more subtle & even had a rather dandy quote I do believe I used cleverly - too bad. My original story about atrocities on the television screen is not only lost but was objectively better.
January 3rd, 2024 03:32
HoboBilbo said:
I wrote a better story about a week before this one, but alas - it got lost. I posted the aforementioned story to an \'introduce yourself\' and—because it wasn\'t directly about me—one of the editors deleted it. I know it was more subtle & even had a rather dandy quote I do believe I used cleverly - too bad. My original story about atrocities on the television screen is not only lost but was objectively better.
January 3rd, 2024 03:32
It was Inspired by Abominable Television
HoboBilbo said:
Every mistake you see, please berate. If something even annoys you, then explain why. I believe at least three of my influences are easy to spot.
December 30th, 2023 11:35
HoboBilbo said:
Every mistake you see, please berate. If something even annoys you, then explain why. I believe at least three of my influences are easy to spot.
December 30th, 2023 11:35
10:06 p.m.
Doggerel Dave said:
Could also try some information on your home page - tell something about yourself.
PS Never been faved by anyone before let alone by a stranger. How much of my stuff do you know?
And to save you the effort, I don\'t do cyber friendships either ....
September 24th, 2023 00:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Could also try some information on your home page - tell something about yourself.
PS Never been faved by anyone before let alone by a stranger. How much of my stuff do you know?
And to save you the effort, I don\'t do cyber friendships either ....
September 24th, 2023 00:26
10:06 p.m.
Bobby O said:
Write a real piece that shows a side of your personality. Haiku is cool but is a limited vehicle to display personality
September 23rd, 2023 22:26
Bobby O said:
Write a real piece that shows a side of your personality. Haiku is cool but is a limited vehicle to display personality
September 23rd, 2023 22:26
My Australian Raven
HoboBilbo said:
I\'m looking for criticism. Please strip this to pieces and berate me.
August 21st, 2023 07:06
HoboBilbo said:
I\'m looking for criticism. Please strip this to pieces and berate me.
August 21st, 2023 07:06
