Comments received on poems by Emma-lee



The Clown
orchidee said:

Good write Emma. Poem is face-shaped / clown-face shape?

August 24th, 2023 14:08

The Clown
Pop64 said:

While very descriptive and clear, I am drawn to the very last 2 words, \"and chose\"\". We are victims of our own actions, not even reactions. So if to want to no longer be the clown, we ourselves need to remove the façade. A truth very well painted

August 24th, 2023 12:20