Comments received on poems by Emma-lee
The Clown
orchidee said:
Good write Emma. Poem is face-shaped / clown-face shape?
August 24th, 2023 14:08
orchidee said:
Good write Emma. Poem is face-shaped / clown-face shape?
August 24th, 2023 14:08
The Clown
Pop64 said:
While very descriptive and clear, I am drawn to the very last 2 words, \"and chose\"\". We are victims of our own actions, not even reactions. So if to want to no longer be the clown, we ourselves need to remove the façade. A truth very well painted
August 24th, 2023 12:20
Pop64 said:
While very descriptive and clear, I am drawn to the very last 2 words, \"and chose\"\". We are victims of our own actions, not even reactions. So if to want to no longer be the clown, we ourselves need to remove the façade. A truth very well painted
August 24th, 2023 12:20