Comments received on poems by l1a_09



Summer of 1993
AuburnScribbler said:

Brilliantly written here l1a_09.

Though I don\'t know the full details of your particular account, in reading this, I relate to times of loss too, but hold on to the hope, that things will get better, as I hope you do too.

This could also be the opening paragraph of an emotional roller-coaster of a story, where although, 1993, for you, was a time of pain, it could also act as the basis of some sort of reclamation.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well.

November 21st, 2023 09:09

I love you too
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

November 20th, 2023 14:38

What if
novaa said:

Nice write!

October 18th, 2023 10:05

follow your-
novaa said:

Very few people are able to listen to the mind most of us just listen to our hearts even if the mind disagrees, even if the mind knows something is wrong. Nice write!

October 17th, 2023 11:49

follow your-
Soman Ragavan said:

Please see the poem \"Silent ache\" by Nidham Nehal on this site and my two batches of comments. It\'s about the head and the heart. Soman Ragavan. 17 October, 2023.

October 17th, 2023 11:14