Comments received on poems by Aallffiee
Four walls and a door
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely and so relatable it flows from the beginning to the end. Very nice and a fave
May 30th, 2026 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely and so relatable it flows from the beginning to the end. Very nice and a fave
May 30th, 2026 05:30
2:00 a.m Playlists
sorenbarrett said:
A great rational for why music seems different at that quiet hour and indeed it does. Very nicely written
May 29th, 2026 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A great rational for why music seems different at that quiet hour and indeed it does. Very nicely written
May 29th, 2026 04:49
Waiting for storms
2781 said:
There probably not as necessary these days, but can stand as a tribute to all involved.
May 28th, 2026 07:18
2781 said:
There probably not as necessary these days, but can stand as a tribute to all involved.
May 28th, 2026 07:18
Waiting for storms
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor. I have a house within sight of a lighthouse and it is an imposing and romantic site. Very well written
May 28th, 2026 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor. I have a house within sight of a lighthouse and it is an imposing and romantic site. Very well written
May 28th, 2026 07:11
The prettiest flowers are the ones that get picked.
Soman Ragavan said:
We will also note that getting picked means quick death, untimely... A flower that dies on the plant dies a natural death. So, beauty cuts both ways. You get noticed and wanted, but at the price of ending your life prematurely... The flower that sits in a vase envies the one that lives to its death on the plant... The flower in the vase is admired but dies a quick death.
May 25th, 2026 22:16
Soman Ragavan said:
We will also note that getting picked means quick death, untimely... A flower that dies on the plant dies a natural death. So, beauty cuts both ways. You get noticed and wanted, but at the price of ending your life prematurely... The flower that sits in a vase envies the one that lives to its death on the plant... The flower in the vase is admired but dies a quick death.
May 25th, 2026 22:16
The prettiest flowers are the ones that get picked.
sorenbarrett said:
Being picked means an early death and being discarded not being picked means living a natural life. That\'s the up side. A great metaphor in this poem. Nicely done.
May 25th, 2026 19:56
sorenbarrett said:
Being picked means an early death and being discarded not being picked means living a natural life. That\'s the up side. A great metaphor in this poem. Nicely done.
May 25th, 2026 19:56
Still Smiling
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the musings of a mind over the reactions of others to another. Well done
May 4th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the musings of a mind over the reactions of others to another. Well done
May 4th, 2026 04:08
Sky-Feathered Chaos
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a bond between animal and man a lovely tale and so nicely depicted in this story of a girl and a bird. Nicely done
April 12th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a bond between animal and man a lovely tale and so nicely depicted in this story of a girl and a bird. Nicely done
April 12th, 2026 06:48
Inside the Silence
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that it is easier for you to write than to speak and that words that way can be thought out and organized and not get cut off. Well done
April 10th, 2026 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that it is easier for you to write than to speak and that words that way can be thought out and organized and not get cut off. Well done
April 10th, 2026 05:31
Alone
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we find ourselves giving too much and not leaving enough to grow. Well done
April 8th, 2026 16:53
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we find ourselves giving too much and not leaving enough to grow. Well done
April 8th, 2026 16:53
Alone
Katie B. said:
You can always reach out and you might get what you need. Well done.
April 8th, 2026 14:28
Katie B. said:
You can always reach out and you might get what you need. Well done.
April 8th, 2026 14:28
A poem for me
Thomas W Case said:
Raw honesty wrapped in grit. A slow-burning, survivor’s voice that holds both the ache of childhood and the hard-won strength of now.
March 31st, 2026 07:38
Thomas W Case said:
Raw honesty wrapped in grit. A slow-burning, survivor’s voice that holds both the ache of childhood and the hard-won strength of now.
March 31st, 2026 07:38
A poem for me
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pride that someone made this far. Whether by luck, destiny, plot armor or force of their own hand making it this far in the game of life is worth something. Nicely said
March 31st, 2026 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pride that someone made this far. Whether by luck, destiny, plot armor or force of their own hand making it this far in the game of life is worth something. Nicely said
March 31st, 2026 04:58
