Comments received on poems by Cameron Pfiester



Crescendo
L. B. Mek said:

\'It whispers secrets of the heart
A solace from the darkest part

But then, the tone shifts, the mood changes
The peace is broken, the horror ranges
The crescendo builds, and the notes collide
A cacophony of emotional tide

The pain and sadness take their toll
The melody weeps, the harmony\'s soul\'
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing

October 13th, 2023 07:26

Crescendo
Parisab said:

Precisely noted…

October 13th, 2023 02:27

Melody
Christina8 said:

Bravo! What a wonderful short story/poem! I love the piano as my grandmother and mother played it. You really made it come alive! I enjoyed it very much!

October 11th, 2023 11:23

Heroes Rise
Cameron Pfiester said:

Send this to any mario x sonic geeks you know...

October 9th, 2023 15:53

Grandmothers
aDarkerMind said:

very touching

October 9th, 2023 07:58

Grandmothers
L. B. Mek said:

Beautiful!
thanks for sharing

October 9th, 2023 03:19

Grandmothers
Osei Zion said:

This reminds me of my grandmother. nice poem

October 9th, 2023 01:50

Grandmothers
Christina8 said:

Allow me to say \"Welcome to MPS!\" Also your poem was so on point. I can remember both of my grandmothers this way and I hope you can too! Your poem was right on in content, rhythm and rhyme. Awesome job!!

October 8th, 2023 23:53

Grandmothers
David Wakeling said:

You are lucky to have a good grandmother.Most of them are dithering idiots with alzheimers disease and diabetes.

October 8th, 2023 16:33