Comments received on poems by Cameron Pfiester
Crescendo
L. B. Mek said:
\'It whispers secrets of the heart
A solace from the darkest part
But then, the tone shifts, the mood changes
The peace is broken, the horror ranges
The crescendo builds, and the notes collide
A cacophony of emotional tide
The pain and sadness take their toll
The melody weeps, the harmony\'s soul\'
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing
October 13th, 2023 07:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'It whispers secrets of the heart
A solace from the darkest part
But then, the tone shifts, the mood changes
The peace is broken, the horror ranges
The crescendo builds, and the notes collide
A cacophony of emotional tide
The pain and sadness take their toll
The melody weeps, the harmony\'s soul\'
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing
October 13th, 2023 07:26
Melody
Christina8 said:
Bravo! What a wonderful short story/poem! I love the piano as my grandmother and mother played it. You really made it come alive! I enjoyed it very much!
October 11th, 2023 11:23
Christina8 said:
Bravo! What a wonderful short story/poem! I love the piano as my grandmother and mother played it. You really made it come alive! I enjoyed it very much!
October 11th, 2023 11:23
Heroes Rise
Cameron Pfiester said:
Send this to any mario x sonic geeks you know...
October 9th, 2023 15:53
Cameron Pfiester said:
Send this to any mario x sonic geeks you know...
October 9th, 2023 15:53
Grandmothers
Christina8 said:
Allow me to say \"Welcome to MPS!\" Also your poem was so on point. I can remember both of my grandmothers this way and I hope you can too! Your poem was right on in content, rhythm and rhyme. Awesome job!!
October 8th, 2023 23:53
Christina8 said:
Allow me to say \"Welcome to MPS!\" Also your poem was so on point. I can remember both of my grandmothers this way and I hope you can too! Your poem was right on in content, rhythm and rhyme. Awesome job!!
October 8th, 2023 23:53
Grandmothers
David Wakeling said:
You are lucky to have a good grandmother.Most of them are dithering idiots with alzheimers disease and diabetes.
October 8th, 2023 16:33
David Wakeling said:
You are lucky to have a good grandmother.Most of them are dithering idiots with alzheimers disease and diabetes.
October 8th, 2023 16:33