Comments received on poems by Arastu Goyal



Voyage Under the Sun
Bella Shepard said:

Expressed so beautifully, those moments when time stands still and we just experience.

November 5th, 2023 09:48

Voyage Under the Sun
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic in its simplicity.

October 27th, 2023 10:30

Time of Night
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic.

October 23rd, 2023 00:47

Wind and Rain
novaa said:

Beautiful!

October 20th, 2023 12:23

Cinnamon Candle~Haiku
Pop64 said:

Perfect haiku form with great visuals (and scent)

October 17th, 2023 06:43

Forever Rain~Haiku
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

October 15th, 2023 00:30

Forever Rain~Haiku
novaa said:

This really made me miss the chilling and cozy vibes of rainfall. Nice read!

October 14th, 2023 10:29

Bird Feather~Haiku
Pop64 said:

A stunningly visual display, I can see it all

October 13th, 2023 07:14

Quiet Night ~ Haiku
Pop64 said:

Terrific form and vivid imagery.

October 12th, 2023 07:08

Scent of Smoke
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful. ❤️

October 12th, 2023 01:04

Scent of Smoke
novaa said:

Very evocative. Loved it!

October 11th, 2023 07:23

Scent of Smoke
Bella Shepard said:

I read this poem and I caught the scent of smoke in the air. It always evokes such pleasant memories. Lovely imagery, thank you!

October 11th, 2023 06:29

The Wind tells Stories
Bella Shepard said:

This is such a lovely way of relating to the wind, and a beautiful poem. I do believe the wind whispers to us, and I love the way you have phrased this. Well done!

October 10th, 2023 13:33