Comments received on poems by zeraprinc
Don\'t Touch My Wounds
Cassie58 said:
Deep loss conveyed in this poem. The repetition works well. The pain is understood by the reader.
December 19th, 2023 12:32
Cassie58 said:
Deep loss conveyed in this poem. The repetition works well. The pain is understood by the reader.
December 19th, 2023 12:32
After you
Cassie58 said:
Broken relationships cause grief. Not easy to get over. It takes time. Your emotions conveyed in this poem have a universal theme. Many will relate. Thank you for sharing.
December 18th, 2023 15:43
Cassie58 said:
Broken relationships cause grief. Not easy to get over. It takes time. Your emotions conveyed in this poem have a universal theme. Many will relate. Thank you for sharing.
December 18th, 2023 15:43
After you
Cassie58 said:
Broken relationships cause grief. Not easy to get over. It takes time. Your emotions conveyed in this poem have a universal theme. Many will relate. Thank you for sharing.
December 18th, 2023 15:43
Cassie58 said:
Broken relationships cause grief. Not easy to get over. It takes time. Your emotions conveyed in this poem have a universal theme. Many will relate. Thank you for sharing.
December 18th, 2023 15:43
A Falcon with a Hundred Faces
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"A falcon with a hundred faces” by zeraprinc
A hundred faces probably means that the being cannot be truly deciphered. “expensive feathers” : in fact, the feathers are designed for the high speed the real bird attains.
With literal falcons :
“As is the case with many birds of prey, falcons have exceptional powers of vision; the visual acuity of one species has been measured at 2.6 times that of a normal human.[6] Peregrine falcons have been recorded diving at speeds of 320 km/h (200 mph), making them the fastest-moving creatures on Earth; the fastest recorded dive attained a vertical speed of 390 km/h (240 mph).[7] “
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Falcon
“everyone goes wrong” : no one can accurately assess. “they don’t see your true face” : the true face is hidden. “your heart is not in your chest, the iceberg just sleeps there” : there is no compassion; just coldness. This being is the cause of suffering, but no one has understood the reasons behind.
“a hundred faces” : the true identity is hidden. “whose nest you are from” : the real identity is unknown. The comparisons are metaphorical.
Soman Ragavan. 11 December, 2023.
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December 11th, 2023 03:17
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"A falcon with a hundred faces” by zeraprinc
A hundred faces probably means that the being cannot be truly deciphered. “expensive feathers” : in fact, the feathers are designed for the high speed the real bird attains.
With literal falcons :
“As is the case with many birds of prey, falcons have exceptional powers of vision; the visual acuity of one species has been measured at 2.6 times that of a normal human.[6] Peregrine falcons have been recorded diving at speeds of 320 km/h (200 mph), making them the fastest-moving creatures on Earth; the fastest recorded dive attained a vertical speed of 390 km/h (240 mph).[7] “
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Falcon
“everyone goes wrong” : no one can accurately assess. “they don’t see your true face” : the true face is hidden. “your heart is not in your chest, the iceberg just sleeps there” : there is no compassion; just coldness. This being is the cause of suffering, but no one has understood the reasons behind.
“a hundred faces” : the true identity is hidden. “whose nest you are from” : the real identity is unknown. The comparisons are metaphorical.
Soman Ragavan. 11 December, 2023.
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December 11th, 2023 03:17
Will I Ever...
Firefall said:
I love the phrase...time can never erase you from my heart. So true.
November 20th, 2023 20:43
Firefall said:
I love the phrase...time can never erase you from my heart. So true.
November 20th, 2023 20:43
Every Part of Your Body Betrays You
Pop64 said:
A wonderful composed direct communication to that person that may deny, but every part says otherwise. Beautiful!
October 17th, 2023 06:37
Pop64 said:
A wonderful composed direct communication to that person that may deny, but every part says otherwise. Beautiful!
October 17th, 2023 06:37
When you stay alone
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully paced and intimate in its poetic voice..
all the best with your book
thanks for sharing
October 16th, 2023 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully paced and intimate in its poetic voice..
all the best with your book
thanks for sharing
October 16th, 2023 06:34
