Comments received on poems by Sheryffat



CUT THE CRAP !
Doggerel Dave said:

Seems to be several themes in your poem. And I’m of course unsure of the context of all of them. However, to your last, in your last stanza: I quite like modest dress – makes a relief from distracting semi nudity. So long as I can see your face…….

July 18th, 2024 20:21

CUT THE CRAP !
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

July 18th, 2024 09:49

Ramadan is Here
Doggerel Dave said:

Just a little mystified re this: I can see the point (fasting), I think, but how do people living in really northern climes work it out?
(Sorry - none else to ask).


March 27th, 2024 05:59

WOE TO THEM
Jazzy.Special said:

LOVE this!

December 10th, 2023 04:13

In Her Shoes...
Sheryffat said:

Yes, only Him understands our plights... \"She files all her requests to her Lord at nights\"

Thanks so much, JohnLee.😊

December 8th, 2023 09:07

They Called it Love.
Sheryffat said:

Could these be love?👇
-insecurity
-obsession

Would love to receive your comments.😊

December 7th, 2023 16:21

In Her Shoes...
John Lee said:

Very well written. Beautiful and touching.
\"At nights, to her Lord, her request flies\"
Yes! Who else can understand if not Him!

December 4th, 2023 20:29