Comments received on poems by Veronica Achlys writes



Your Poisonous Love
Thoughtless said:

A good description of a toxic relationship. Well done. Real or fictional or a hybrid?

August 22nd, 2024 12:20

I\'m my own demise
peto said:

Has a real feeling of self isolation
Good thing about that is
You know the way out as creator of the maze should you choose
Unique dark exquisite
Impressive again

March 10th, 2024 06:59

I\'m my own demise
Cassie58 said:

Quite a dark, descriptive poem. Great lead in to the tormentors who run the gauntlet of the poet’s mind. Highly creative lines. We have Goths in our family. They would appreciate this poem.

March 10th, 2024 06:25

There are graveyards of people who\'re alive
Cassie58 said:

A strong piece of brevity. A treacherous lover now confined to the graveyard of memories. Fabulous imagery.

March 10th, 2024 00:15

There are graveyards of people who\'re alive
peto said:

I\'m with mendedfences on this
Keep coming back for another look
It\'s unique And thought provoking
Thoroughly enjoyed

March 9th, 2024 12:09

There are graveyards of people who\'re alive
MendedFences27 said:

Your loss of love symbolized as a graveyard. Quite emphatically. A very gripping poem. Loved it - Phil A.

March 9th, 2024 11:58