Comments received on poems by kheza
A Coward’s Love
arqios said:
Now a poem written out and shared that is close to the path I’ve trod. Much liked 👍🏻
December 28th, 2024 21:04
arqios said:
Now a poem written out and shared that is close to the path I’ve trod. Much liked 👍🏻
December 28th, 2024 21:04
A Coward’s Love
TobaniNataiella said:
A heartfelt and touching account of some one with real remorse of how they have treated some one, written with honesty and with sincerity.
December 28th, 2024 18:01
TobaniNataiella said:
A heartfelt and touching account of some one with real remorse of how they have treated some one, written with honesty and with sincerity.
December 28th, 2024 18:01
When the Butterflies Leave
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautifully written poem, i very enjoyed reading it, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 05:05
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautifully written poem, i very enjoyed reading it, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 05:05
When the Butterflies Leave
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “When the butterflies leave” by Kheza
“They left their wings on my windowsill,
fragile, torn,
a goodbye I didn’t see coming….” Butterflies are fragile; so are their wings. With their wings gone, there is no hope for them to survive. They drop like stones. “A goodbye I did not see coming” : very poetic and touching way to describe the death of the butterflies.
Nerves are the stuff that tell us we are alive and responsive. Even if they give bad experiences, at least they tell us that there is still worthy life in us. Nerves here also refer to feelings : both the nerves and feelings are gone. Life has become an automation. We are reduced to doing things mechanically, like robots.
“hoping one day the butterflies will return….” : hope that feelings and passions will be restored.
“But I know they won’t.
They never do.” The poem ends on a pessimistic note. The realization or fear that all is lost. The dwindling life is compared with the fate of butterflies : the day comes when they lose their wings and tumble into death. Soman Ragavan. 24 November, 2024.
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November 24th, 2024 10:18
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “When the butterflies leave” by Kheza
“They left their wings on my windowsill,
fragile, torn,
a goodbye I didn’t see coming….” Butterflies are fragile; so are their wings. With their wings gone, there is no hope for them to survive. They drop like stones. “A goodbye I did not see coming” : very poetic and touching way to describe the death of the butterflies.
Nerves are the stuff that tell us we are alive and responsive. Even if they give bad experiences, at least they tell us that there is still worthy life in us. Nerves here also refer to feelings : both the nerves and feelings are gone. Life has become an automation. We are reduced to doing things mechanically, like robots.
“hoping one day the butterflies will return….” : hope that feelings and passions will be restored.
“But I know they won’t.
They never do.” The poem ends on a pessimistic note. The realization or fear that all is lost. The dwindling life is compared with the fate of butterflies : the day comes when they lose their wings and tumble into death. Soman Ragavan. 24 November, 2024.
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November 24th, 2024 10:18
When the Butterflies Leave
weepingpetrichor said:
This was a beautiful poem. I felt my heart literally ache while reading it.
November 24th, 2024 08:48
weepingpetrichor said:
This was a beautiful poem. I felt my heart literally ache while reading it.
November 24th, 2024 08:48
The Silent Echoes
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone loves a fool no one loves the wise they are shunned and at times worse. The wisest man plays the part of a fool. Loved the write.
July 29th, 2024 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone loves a fool no one loves the wise they are shunned and at times worse. The wisest man plays the part of a fool. Loved the write.
July 29th, 2024 09:56
Whispers in the Night
2781 said:
For thus says the Lord God, the Holy One of Israel; in returning and rest ye shall be saved; in quietness and confidence shall be your strength:
June 14th, 2024 10:35
2781 said:
For thus says the Lord God, the Holy One of Israel; in returning and rest ye shall be saved; in quietness and confidence shall be your strength:
June 14th, 2024 10:35
Silence Between Us
Firefall said:
Lovely poem. You really capture the sadness of losing someone important to you.
May 28th, 2024 20:20
Firefall said:
Lovely poem. You really capture the sadness of losing someone important to you.
May 28th, 2024 20:20
Little squirrel
Lei said:
great poem it really captures the emotion one feels with a breakup also thanks for publishing this poem (i really needed it Lol)
May 27th, 2024 00:09
Lei said:
great poem it really captures the emotion one feels with a breakup also thanks for publishing this poem (i really needed it Lol)
May 27th, 2024 00:09
