Comments received on poems by Manslick



My play
sorenbarrett said:

I think you dodged them well done

July 29th, 2024 18:15

cash in a bag
antra.sharma_ said:

Fantastic

June 21st, 2024 20:25

my mood
Manslick said:

i want no pulse
not yours mine
you are not cool
you\'re stiff

a solid piece of shit
look at you
oh my
you will not be my guy

damn - did you see him
who - you know who
that funky trunk on the floor
oh shit he got me going

go guirl
you horny squirrel
you smiling face i love
kiss me come on now we love

June 15th, 2024 00:29

no one is there
2781 said:

That is sad.

June 4th, 2024 08:32

no compassion
Manslick said:

you are fucked up

June 1st, 2024 22:15

no compassion
2781 said:

I can think of an interpretation that rymes with compassion..

June 1st, 2024 22:14