On a Wet Journey
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading \"ON A WET JOURNEY.\" It\'s incredible how vividly you captured the scene and the emotions of that day. Writing poetry in a second language is no small feat, and you\'ve done an amazing job bringing your experience to life.

Your use of imagery and the way you conveyed the protagonist\'s journey from urgency to tranquility really resonated with me. It\'s impressive how effectively you express yourself in a second language, a skill I do not have. Your talent and dedication truly shine through in this piece.

Thank you for sharing such a beautiful and evocative poem. I look forward to reading more of your work!

August 4th, 2024 13:19

On a Wet Journey
sorenbarrett said:

A snapshot of life and in a sense a metaphor as well. Nicely written

July 19th, 2024 05:26