Comments received on poems by I am Danea



Hmm.
everythingup said:

This deep; love the message

August 11th, 2024 17:01

Hmm.
arial said:

If life is lonesome
Than make a friend
Not a human no never
But that voice that blends
A hand two made
Let them intervine
Hug that child and say
We are here and that\'s fine
Be kind to her she wasn\'t made for this
But what can we say ..
That\'s not our cue of sheets


August 11th, 2024 15:56

Hmm.
sorenbarrett said:

We all are alone despite how many relationships we have. A fear of death most have and an existential crisis well expressed here. Nicely done

August 11th, 2024 09:26

House on fire
Thoughtless said:

Toxic is toxic. I had some of this in my life as well. Writing is therapeutic. Keep writing.

August 11th, 2024 08:43

Hmm.
Thoughtless said:

We all die alone. Remembrance is for those who live. However, it is sad not to be remembered. Good write.

August 11th, 2024 08:41

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2781 said:

A father of the fatherless, and a judge of the widows, is God in his holy habitation.

August 11th, 2024 08:40

House on fire
sorenbarrett said:

Metaphoric in many ways this poem speaks of distress and agitation. Nicely put into poetic form

August 10th, 2024 15:32