Comments received on poems by Vsevolod Fomin
Time flies forward
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful song here. It takes me through the phases of the day to the sunset and it would seem that the question of where is the end would be in the night. The tone of the song is happy as said in the phrase \"I am so blissfully happy gathering these strange light songs of my heart\" A lovely light song.
August 18th, 2024 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful song here. It takes me through the phases of the day to the sunset and it would seem that the question of where is the end would be in the night. The tone of the song is happy as said in the phrase \"I am so blissfully happy gathering these strange light songs of my heart\" A lovely light song.
August 18th, 2024 05:31
Rain flickers outside the window
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the line that sun changes places with the moon as it literally does from day to night but also the moon light being a reflection of the sun. Nicely worded this poem has many deeper elements.
August 17th, 2024 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the line that sun changes places with the moon as it literally does from day to night but also the moon light being a reflection of the sun. Nicely worded this poem has many deeper elements.
August 17th, 2024 09:15
I love the way she sleeps
sorenbarrett said:
It does ring with music and I can hear the voice singing the sad refrain. Nicely done
August 16th, 2024 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
It does ring with music and I can hear the voice singing the sad refrain. Nicely done
August 16th, 2024 07:43
