Comments received on poems by jeffburton1
Droplets
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! The repetition of that closing line every single stanza is very effective when the actual concluding stanza adds its weight. Gorgeous! I love the detailing and somber tone, and give up after that since there\'s too much more to add. Thank you for sharing!
August 30th, 2024 18:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! The repetition of that closing line every single stanza is very effective when the actual concluding stanza adds its weight. Gorgeous! I love the detailing and somber tone, and give up after that since there\'s too much more to add. Thank you for sharing!
August 30th, 2024 18:38
Seagulls
sorenbarrett said:
Bravo! A beautiful message so well penned. Put our attention to the moment, our happiness, that of others and how that makes a future difference.
August 29th, 2024 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Bravo! A beautiful message so well penned. Put our attention to the moment, our happiness, that of others and how that makes a future difference.
August 29th, 2024 05:48
The Cosmos Sonnet
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful description of the universe of which we are a micro part. Very poetically done
August 28th, 2024 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful description of the universe of which we are a micro part. Very poetically done
August 28th, 2024 06:30
Astronauts
Cheeky Missy said:
Haha, your closing line dredged up that late \'80\'s movie Inner Space my mother thought quasi acceptable for us kids to watch with our parents and which I bought for myself finally in memory of her.
We\'ll not burn it up, made of its dust, albeit it will meet conflagration sooner than most like, according to the Scriptures.
Fun, thought-provoking, and rather inspiring.
Thank you for sharing.
August 25th, 2024 18:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Haha, your closing line dredged up that late \'80\'s movie Inner Space my mother thought quasi acceptable for us kids to watch with our parents and which I bought for myself finally in memory of her.
We\'ll not burn it up, made of its dust, albeit it will meet conflagration sooner than most like, according to the Scriptures.
Fun, thought-provoking, and rather inspiring.
Thank you for sharing.
August 25th, 2024 18:26
Message in a Bottle
sorenbarrett said:
Messages found bring curiosity as a guest. A most fun write that kept attention to the very end. Nicely penned
August 25th, 2024 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
Messages found bring curiosity as a guest. A most fun write that kept attention to the very end. Nicely penned
August 25th, 2024 05:39
Message in a Bottle
orchidee said:
Good write Jeff.
I tried a message in a (glass) bottle. I didn\'t get far. It hit a rock and smashed when I threw it in the sea. Doh! lol.
I do tell some porkies.
August 25th, 2024 01:14
orchidee said:
Good write Jeff.
I tried a message in a (glass) bottle. I didn\'t get far. It hit a rock and smashed when I threw it in the sea. Doh! lol.
I do tell some porkies.
August 25th, 2024 01:14
Message in a Bottle
Cassie58 said:
Message in a Bottle. You reminded me of that great song by the Police. I am still waiting to find a bottle washed up on the shore. Fab poem, lovely read. Happy Sunday.
August 25th, 2024 01:09
Cassie58 said:
Message in a Bottle. You reminded me of that great song by the Police. I am still waiting to find a bottle washed up on the shore. Fab poem, lovely read. Happy Sunday.
August 25th, 2024 01:09
Message in a Bottle
Dan Williams said:
Who hasn\'t dreamed of finding a message in a bottle/ This one conveys perpetual. Who, we think, could have sent it, from where? Nice work.
August 25th, 2024 00:10
Dan Williams said:
Who hasn\'t dreamed of finding a message in a bottle/ This one conveys perpetual. Who, we think, could have sent it, from where? Nice work.
August 25th, 2024 00:10
Message in a Bottle
Mason Vollman said:
Wow, powerful yet beautiful write Jeff!
August 24th, 2024 22:51
Mason Vollman said:
Wow, powerful yet beautiful write Jeff!
August 24th, 2024 22:51
Message in a Bottle
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many unopened bottles.
Great write.
August 24th, 2024 22:49
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many unopened bottles.
Great write.
August 24th, 2024 22:49
The Grace of the Ordinary
orchidee said:
A fine write Jeff, and Happy Birthday for 4 days ago, I see!
August 22nd, 2024 01:36
orchidee said:
A fine write Jeff, and Happy Birthday for 4 days ago, I see!
August 22nd, 2024 01:36
The Grace of the Ordinary
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said. Nature is a wonderful thing.
August 21st, 2024 18:48
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said. Nature is a wonderful thing.
August 21st, 2024 18:48
Presents
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of being a permanent part of the universe is brought out by this poem
August 20th, 2024 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of being a permanent part of the universe is brought out by this poem
August 20th, 2024 20:07
