Comments received on poems by LP2187
Myself
TobaniNataiella said:
Although at times it is very difficult to do, you have to be you. The only thing any of us can really be in control is who we are as people, it`s hard but stick with it. A sad poem but i am glad i read it, Take Care
December 20th, 2024 08:03
TobaniNataiella said:
Although at times it is very difficult to do, you have to be you. The only thing any of us can really be in control is who we are as people, it`s hard but stick with it. A sad poem but i am glad i read it, Take Care
December 20th, 2024 08:03
Myself
Cassie58 said:
A classic case of beating yourself up. I find that really sad. Even when you are yourself, others don’t always accept you. That’s the way the cookie crumbles. Have a beautiful day. I enjoyed reading you.
December 20th, 2024 06:48
Cassie58 said:
A classic case of beating yourself up. I find that really sad. Even when you are yourself, others don’t always accept you. That’s the way the cookie crumbles. Have a beautiful day. I enjoyed reading you.
December 20th, 2024 06:48
Mistakes
TobaniNataiella said:
Acknowledging your mistakes from the past and correcting them, (which you are doing in this poem)is the way to help obtain a better future, well written poem
December 19th, 2024 22:33
TobaniNataiella said:
Acknowledging your mistakes from the past and correcting them, (which you are doing in this poem)is the way to help obtain a better future, well written poem
December 19th, 2024 22:33
Feeling
TobaniNataiella said:
A sad and emotional poem, well written, be Strong
December 8th, 2024 17:14
TobaniNataiella said:
A sad and emotional poem, well written, be Strong
December 8th, 2024 17:14
Faults (2)
TobaniNataiella said:
Nice poem, think it can apply to most of us
December 2nd, 2024 05:21
TobaniNataiella said:
Nice poem, think it can apply to most of us
December 2nd, 2024 05:21
Earth
2781 said:
The earth abides forever, like ourselves it has everything set up for self healing.
Rest is always the best medicine and time heals.
Problem is, she doesn\'t get any rest just raped and pillaged.
So unfortunately humans either have to change or die.
November 28th, 2024 11:41
2781 said:
The earth abides forever, like ourselves it has everything set up for self healing.
Rest is always the best medicine and time heals.
Problem is, she doesn\'t get any rest just raped and pillaged.
So unfortunately humans either have to change or die.
November 28th, 2024 11:41
Feeding
2781 said:
Out of this world everything is backwards. The lower we get the higher he takes us.
November 28th, 2024 11:33
2781 said:
Out of this world everything is backwards. The lower we get the higher he takes us.
November 28th, 2024 11:33
Down, to the ground
Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu said:
So nice. I like the direct address; 2nd person point of view.
I like the diction too. \"Unless you like to make me feel
Everything that you’ve once felt
When I had no part in your misery
You just want me to feel your pain\"
Wow❤️
November 4th, 2024 23:58
Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu said:
So nice. I like the direct address; 2nd person point of view.
I like the diction too. \"Unless you like to make me feel
Everything that you’ve once felt
When I had no part in your misery
You just want me to feel your pain\"
Wow❤️
November 4th, 2024 23:58
Down, to the ground
sorenbarrett said:
Taking another down with you so you can feel better about yourself and have company is a cowardly act and a sign of insecurity and poor self esteem. This poem tells well the feeling of those around such a person. Nicely done
October 21st, 2024 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Taking another down with you so you can feel better about yourself and have company is a cowardly act and a sign of insecurity and poor self esteem. This poem tells well the feeling of those around such a person. Nicely done
October 21st, 2024 04:46
No to racism, yes to respect
Mutley Ravishes said:
“They pin us against each other, then sit back and watch it happen.”
September 28th, 2024 01:29
Mutley Ravishes said:
“They pin us against each other, then sit back and watch it happen.”
September 28th, 2024 01:29
No to racism, yes to respect
Demar Desu said:
How do you feel about nationalism
September 27th, 2024 20:37
Demar Desu said:
How do you feel about nationalism
September 27th, 2024 20:37
Good soldiers follow orders
Dan Williams said:
This is all too appropriate these days. Sad but true. Very nice.
September 23rd, 2024 00:21
Dan Williams said:
This is all too appropriate these days. Sad but true. Very nice.
September 23rd, 2024 00:21
Good soldiers follow orders
orchidee said:
Thanks for \'favouriting\' several of my poems.
I doubt I will guess the meaning of anything too cryptic (difficult, hidden meaning, etc)! lol.
September 22nd, 2024 10:28
orchidee said:
Thanks for \'favouriting\' several of my poems.
I doubt I will guess the meaning of anything too cryptic (difficult, hidden meaning, etc)! lol.
September 22nd, 2024 10:28
Difference
orchidee said:
My jokes might make you worse. lol.
Here\'s a dark joke: \'Try suicide? Oohh no, it\'s bad for me health, and it\'ll hurt!\' \'And what if I try it, and don\'t like it?\' (heehee, a terrible joke there).
September 21st, 2024 05:59
orchidee said:
My jokes might make you worse. lol.
Here\'s a dark joke: \'Try suicide? Oohh no, it\'s bad for me health, and it\'ll hurt!\' \'And what if I try it, and don\'t like it?\' (heehee, a terrible joke there).
September 21st, 2024 05:59
IT
orchidee said:
I never knew Information Technology (IT) caused so much pain! lol.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. heehee.
September 20th, 2024 14:23
orchidee said:
I never knew Information Technology (IT) caused so much pain! lol.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. heehee.
September 20th, 2024 14:23
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