Comments received on poems by LP2187
Down, to the ground
Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu said:
So nice. I like the direct address; 2nd person point of view.
I like the diction too. \"Unless you like to make me feel
Everything that you’ve once felt
When I had no part in your misery
You just want me to feel your pain\"
Wow❤️
November 4th, 2024 23:58
Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu said:
So nice. I like the direct address; 2nd person point of view.
I like the diction too. \"Unless you like to make me feel
Everything that you’ve once felt
When I had no part in your misery
You just want me to feel your pain\"
Wow❤️
November 4th, 2024 23:58
Down, to the ground
sorenbarrett said:
Taking another down with you so you can feel better about yourself and have company is a cowardly act and a sign of insecurity and poor self esteem. This poem tells well the feeling of those around such a person. Nicely done
October 21st, 2024 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Taking another down with you so you can feel better about yourself and have company is a cowardly act and a sign of insecurity and poor self esteem. This poem tells well the feeling of those around such a person. Nicely done
October 21st, 2024 04:46
No to racism, yes to respect
Mutley Ravishes said:
“They pin us against each other, then sit back and watch it happen.”
September 28th, 2024 01:29
Mutley Ravishes said:
“They pin us against each other, then sit back and watch it happen.”
September 28th, 2024 01:29
No to racism, yes to respect
Demar Desu said:
How do you feel about nationalism
September 27th, 2024 20:37
Demar Desu said:
How do you feel about nationalism
September 27th, 2024 20:37
Good soldiers follow orders
Dan Williams said:
This is all too appropriate these days. Sad but true. Very nice.
September 23rd, 2024 00:21
Dan Williams said:
This is all too appropriate these days. Sad but true. Very nice.
September 23rd, 2024 00:21
Good soldiers follow orders
orchidee said:
Thanks for \'favouriting\' several of my poems.
I doubt I will guess the meaning of anything too cryptic (difficult, hidden meaning, etc)! lol.
September 22nd, 2024 10:28
orchidee said:
Thanks for \'favouriting\' several of my poems.
I doubt I will guess the meaning of anything too cryptic (difficult, hidden meaning, etc)! lol.
September 22nd, 2024 10:28
Difference
orchidee said:
My jokes might make you worse. lol.
Here\'s a dark joke: \'Try suicide? Oohh no, it\'s bad for me health, and it\'ll hurt!\' \'And what if I try it, and don\'t like it?\' (heehee, a terrible joke there).
September 21st, 2024 05:59
orchidee said:
My jokes might make you worse. lol.
Here\'s a dark joke: \'Try suicide? Oohh no, it\'s bad for me health, and it\'ll hurt!\' \'And what if I try it, and don\'t like it?\' (heehee, a terrible joke there).
September 21st, 2024 05:59
IT
orchidee said:
I never knew Information Technology (IT) caused so much pain! lol.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. heehee.
September 20th, 2024 14:23
orchidee said:
I never knew Information Technology (IT) caused so much pain! lol.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. heehee.
September 20th, 2024 14:23
Ruben
Cassie58 said:
You know I am so pleased you have still got Ruben. My grandkids are all in their twenties. I couldn’t bear to throw out their soft toy friends. We still have Charlie mouse, Peter rabbit and little Ted. I think I love them as much as my grandkids do. I enjoyed reading you. I can remember when Beth lost Charlie mouse. She was distraught. We had to order another one prompto off the internet.
September 19th, 2024 11:33
Cassie58 said:
You know I am so pleased you have still got Ruben. My grandkids are all in their twenties. I couldn’t bear to throw out their soft toy friends. We still have Charlie mouse, Peter rabbit and little Ted. I think I love them as much as my grandkids do. I enjoyed reading you. I can remember when Beth lost Charlie mouse. She was distraught. We had to order another one prompto off the internet.
September 19th, 2024 11:33
This is how it feels
Cassie58 said:
An outpouring of words. A good way to release those pent up emotions, to let off steam. There’s a lot of anger and hurt in them LP2187. Conveyed with much feeling.
September 18th, 2024 02:38
Cassie58 said:
An outpouring of words. A good way to release those pent up emotions, to let off steam. There’s a lot of anger and hurt in them LP2187. Conveyed with much feeling.
September 18th, 2024 02:38
This is how it feels
Dan Williams said:
Wow. There is a whole lot of anger here. Chill out. Listen to music.
September 18th, 2024 00:36
Dan Williams said:
Wow. There is a whole lot of anger here. Chill out. Listen to music.
September 18th, 2024 00:36
Should’ve walked away
Cassie58 said:
Yes, best walk away, particularly when you are outnumbered. A lesson to be remembered. I sincerely hope you weren’t hurt. A short poem of experience.
September 17th, 2024 08:05
Cassie58 said:
Yes, best walk away, particularly when you are outnumbered. A lesson to be remembered. I sincerely hope you weren’t hurt. A short poem of experience.
September 17th, 2024 08:05
This is how it feels
NafisaSB said:
would hat to be at the receiving end..what a powerful display of emotions
September 17th, 2024 01:28
NafisaSB said:
would hat to be at the receiving end..what a powerful display of emotions
September 17th, 2024 01:28
This is how it feels
orchidee said:
Ooh, not today, thank you! (heehee).
But cuddles and hugs - yes please!
September 16th, 2024 13:07
orchidee said:
Ooh, not today, thank you! (heehee).
But cuddles and hugs - yes please!
September 16th, 2024 13:07
Voiceless
NinjaGirl said:
preyed upon because they thought we were quiet...but they made us quiet now...who would believe us when he\'s louder?
September 15th, 2024 09:45
NinjaGirl said:
preyed upon because they thought we were quiet...but they made us quiet now...who would believe us when he\'s louder?
September 15th, 2024 09:45
The Monster Within
orchidee said:
Several want to kill me when I begin to (so-called) sing! heehee. Or at least silence me. Doh!
September 14th, 2024 09:30
orchidee said:
Several want to kill me when I begin to (so-called) sing! heehee. Or at least silence me. Doh!
September 14th, 2024 09:30
Killer
MR.apocalypse said:
I was just like you when I started writing you should look at some of my earlier work then look at my new stuff that\'s going to be you one day lol ❤️
September 13th, 2024 21:14
MR.apocalypse said:
I was just like you when I started writing you should look at some of my earlier work then look at my new stuff that\'s going to be you one day lol ❤️
September 13th, 2024 21:14
Killer
NinjaGirl said:
Instead of seeing a murderous psychopath I see someone who had their life flipped upside down and is angry about it. I see someone who wants control again, and who doesn\'t want the things in her head to eat her alive.
September 13th, 2024 16:58
NinjaGirl said:
Instead of seeing a murderous psychopath I see someone who had their life flipped upside down and is angry about it. I see someone who wants control again, and who doesn\'t want the things in her head to eat her alive.
September 13th, 2024 16:58
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