Comments received on poems by LP2187
I am all alone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Me too! Well done, my friend. An exquisite senryu that I can relate to. I am sure not to be the only one. 🌹👏
January 19th, 2025 16:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Me too! Well done, my friend. An exquisite senryu that I can relate to. I am sure not to be the only one. 🌹👏
January 19th, 2025 16:21
I am all alone
Cassie58 said:
A senryu which packs a punch with the emotion delivered. It can be frightening to think that you are totally alone. So very isolating. Many people are in this position, especially the elderly.
January 19th, 2025 08:38
Cassie58 said:
A senryu which packs a punch with the emotion delivered. It can be frightening to think that you are totally alone. So very isolating. Many people are in this position, especially the elderly.
January 19th, 2025 08:38
I am all alone
sorenbarrett said:
What a powerful senryu this is. Forceful and powerful in its weakness it presents the angst of the world modern or primative where in the past we found security in numbers but today we find only isolation in the masses
January 19th, 2025 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
What a powerful senryu this is. Forceful and powerful in its weakness it presents the angst of the world modern or primative where in the past we found security in numbers but today we find only isolation in the masses
January 19th, 2025 07:37
I am all alone
Teddy.15 said:
This is actually a senryu just to share my knowledge because it speaks with emotion rather than imagery, and wow what a senryu it is, perfectly executed the emotion is raw. Beautifully done, and in my own life there have been times I\'ve truly felt this way physically and mentally. 🌹
January 19th, 2025 05:55
Teddy.15 said:
This is actually a senryu just to share my knowledge because it speaks with emotion rather than imagery, and wow what a senryu it is, perfectly executed the emotion is raw. Beautifully done, and in my own life there have been times I\'ve truly felt this way physically and mentally. 🌹
January 19th, 2025 05:55
I am all alone
arqios said:
Being alone can be so debilitating. I’m not sure that anyone is a hundred percent introverted.
January 19th, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
Being alone can be so debilitating. I’m not sure that anyone is a hundred percent introverted.
January 19th, 2025 05:35
I am all alone
Cheeky Missy said:
This should resonate with so very many it could be graven in stone everywhere, and then we\'d find out, perhaps, that we\'re not entirely alone. Yet maybe not. Excellently rendered in appropriate brevity with a gripping poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 05:18
Cheeky Missy said:
This should resonate with so very many it could be graven in stone everywhere, and then we\'d find out, perhaps, that we\'re not entirely alone. Yet maybe not. Excellently rendered in appropriate brevity with a gripping poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 05:18
Chasing light
arqios said:
Bursting with vibrant images! A true delight 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 19th, 2025 02:47
arqios said:
Bursting with vibrant images! A true delight 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 19th, 2025 02:47
Chasing light
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Intriguing and irresistibly enchanting, how excellently rendered! Fascinating imagery with a haunting and enticing poignancy give this beauty such charm, I love it. Thank you so very much for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 21:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Intriguing and irresistibly enchanting, how excellently rendered! Fascinating imagery with a haunting and enticing poignancy give this beauty such charm, I love it. Thank you so very much for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 21:50
Chasing light
Teddy.15 said:
There is so much beauty in here, yet I can feel that there is also a massive haunting, chasing light, keep going you will eventually find it, I promise because I did. 🌹
January 18th, 2025 17:06
Teddy.15 said:
There is so much beauty in here, yet I can feel that there is also a massive haunting, chasing light, keep going you will eventually find it, I promise because I did. 🌹
January 18th, 2025 17:06
Chasing light
NinjaGirl said:
Very beautiful, your words are a sword for sure
January 18th, 2025 14:17
NinjaGirl said:
Very beautiful, your words are a sword for sure
January 18th, 2025 14:17
Chasing light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I really do love your poems and their imagery, my friend. Well done on this! The repetition...just brilliantly executed! 🌹👏 Easy fave!
January 18th, 2025 11:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I really do love your poems and their imagery, my friend. Well done on this! The repetition...just brilliantly executed! 🌹👏 Easy fave!
January 18th, 2025 11:42
Chasing light
jim56 said:
love this good imagery and
word use is amazing . nice flow
well written and expressed
you are very talented dont stop writing
brilliant poem great read jim xx
January 18th, 2025 09:34
jim56 said:
love this good imagery and
word use is amazing . nice flow
well written and expressed
you are very talented dont stop writing
brilliant poem great read jim xx
January 18th, 2025 09:34
The infernal haze
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is heavy and dark with glimpses of hope and light. Death seems ever present with a haunting omnipresent threat, Dust seems a metaphor within a metaphor of all that is left. It ends as dark more forboding than its beginning. Metaphor of life or personal life?
January 18th, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is heavy and dark with glimpses of hope and light. Death seems ever present with a haunting omnipresent threat, Dust seems a metaphor within a metaphor of all that is left. It ends as dark more forboding than its beginning. Metaphor of life or personal life?
January 18th, 2025 05:28
The infernal haze
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love this because I feel like it shows how quickly you can go from being ok to not ok, and the imagery is freaking amazing
January 17th, 2025 19:13
NinjaGirl said:
I absolutely love this because I feel like it shows how quickly you can go from being ok to not ok, and the imagery is freaking amazing
January 17th, 2025 19:13
The infernal haze
Cassie58 said:
Some fine imagery in this poem which also plays on the reader’s emotions. From a calm setting through to what appears to be chaos. The beach is a great place to walk when dealing with emotional turmoil. You took us on quite a journey here. Enjoyed the read.
January 17th, 2025 13:48
Cassie58 said:
Some fine imagery in this poem which also plays on the reader’s emotions. From a calm setting through to what appears to be chaos. The beach is a great place to walk when dealing with emotional turmoil. You took us on quite a journey here. Enjoyed the read.
January 17th, 2025 13:48
The infernal haze
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love this poem and its structure. The imagery is vivid, touching upon the senses: visual, tactile, olfactory, auditory, and gustatory senses are all present in this poem, and it also has a kinesthetic sense, as the narrator is in motion throughout. The structure, again, is magnificent. I love how you wrote mostly in sestets but concluded with a tercet. That was really unexpected and effective, in my humble opinion. And that\'s not to mention the content...a blending of beauty (a beach scene)...with melancholy and the struggle to find hope and meaning in life. Such a hard task when the melancholy obscures the view and weighs you down to a crawl. I get this, I\'ve walked along this very oppressive shoreline. Thank you so much for putting it into words and capturing what many of us go through on a daily basis. A poignant write with a haunting urgency. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 08:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love this poem and its structure. The imagery is vivid, touching upon the senses: visual, tactile, olfactory, auditory, and gustatory senses are all present in this poem, and it also has a kinesthetic sense, as the narrator is in motion throughout. The structure, again, is magnificent. I love how you wrote mostly in sestets but concluded with a tercet. That was really unexpected and effective, in my humble opinion. And that\'s not to mention the content...a blending of beauty (a beach scene)...with melancholy and the struggle to find hope and meaning in life. Such a hard task when the melancholy obscures the view and weighs you down to a crawl. I get this, I\'ve walked along this very oppressive shoreline. Thank you so much for putting it into words and capturing what many of us go through on a daily basis. A poignant write with a haunting urgency. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 08:52
The infernal haze
arqios said:
This poem transitions from tranquility to turmoil, capturing the complexity of navigating through a landscape filled with beauty, fear, and chaos. It uses vivid and powerful imagery to convey the speaker\'s journey, evoking a strong emotional response. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 17th, 2025 07:14
arqios said:
This poem transitions from tranquility to turmoil, capturing the complexity of navigating through a landscape filled with beauty, fear, and chaos. It uses vivid and powerful imagery to convey the speaker\'s journey, evoking a strong emotional response. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 17th, 2025 07:14
The infernal haze
Michael Edwards said:
Paints a great picture - a worthy read.
January 17th, 2025 03:29
Michael Edwards said:
Paints a great picture - a worthy read.
January 17th, 2025 03:29
Forever lost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful senryu, my friend. Sadly, I know this feeling all too well! Well done. 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 19:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful senryu, my friend. Sadly, I know this feeling all too well! Well done. 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 19:17
Forever lost
Cassie58 said:
A strong senryu which delivers on its title. I like that Teddy has penned one for you that offers hope.
January 16th, 2025 17:05
Cassie58 said:
A strong senryu which delivers on its title. I like that Teddy has penned one for you that offers hope.
January 16th, 2025 17:05
Forever lost
Teddy.15 said:
I found your seryu incredibly powerful and poignant to how we all feel at some time,
Here is one for you inspired by yours, with a touch of hope. ❤️
Tears now fill my eyes
I\'m lost but not forever
Anxiety fades.
January 16th, 2025 14:18
Teddy.15 said:
I found your seryu incredibly powerful and poignant to how we all feel at some time,
Here is one for you inspired by yours, with a touch of hope. ❤️
Tears now fill my eyes
I\'m lost but not forever
Anxiety fades.
January 16th, 2025 14:18
A new day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the monorhyme and how it is structured in tercets with a concluding quatrain. The flow of this is very musical, each line feels very connected to the previous. The message is wonderful as well...the darkness is present but even more so is the presence of light. Well done, my friend. Enjoyed this a lot. An easy fave. 🌹👏
January 15th, 2025 16:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the monorhyme and how it is structured in tercets with a concluding quatrain. The flow of this is very musical, each line feels very connected to the previous. The message is wonderful as well...the darkness is present but even more so is the presence of light. Well done, my friend. Enjoyed this a lot. An easy fave. 🌹👏
January 15th, 2025 16:33
A new day
Cheeky Missy said:
Monorhyme in quatrains and I didn\'t bother to suss out the metre. Kinda a fun exercise, isn\'t it, though? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 15th, 2025 14:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Monorhyme in quatrains and I didn\'t bother to suss out the metre. Kinda a fun exercise, isn\'t it, though? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 15th, 2025 14:14
A walk in the park
NinjaGirl said:
One little action... just going for a walk
January 14th, 2025 12:54
NinjaGirl said:
One little action... just going for a walk
January 14th, 2025 12:54
A walk in the park
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yikes! Beware that lake! 🤣 A wonderful limerick my friend! 🌹👏
January 14th, 2025 08:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yikes! Beware that lake! 🤣 A wonderful limerick my friend! 🌹👏
January 14th, 2025 08:55
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