Comments received on poems by LP2187
One minute ago
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of fear , anger, and confusion in the short but very powerful piece, hope all ok
February 15th, 2025 12:52
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of fear , anger, and confusion in the short but very powerful piece, hope all ok
February 15th, 2025 12:52
Shadows
Tristan Robert Lange said:
So existential. Well expressed, my friend! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
So existential. Well expressed, my friend! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:43
One minute ago
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy...this rings true and hits home. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy...this rings true and hits home. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:42
One minute ago
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has the sense of how fragile things can be. A wonderful poetic use of wording to set the emotional stage. Very nice
February 15th, 2025 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has the sense of how fragile things can be. A wonderful poetic use of wording to set the emotional stage. Very nice
February 15th, 2025 09:14
One minute ago
arqios said:
Been there and done that more times than I can be comfortable with. Hope all is well for you. 🕊🙏🏻
February 15th, 2025 09:03
arqios said:
Been there and done that more times than I can be comfortable with. Hope all is well for you. 🕊🙏🏻
February 15th, 2025 09:03
Shadows
arqios said:
Gives the feeling of someone being somehow stuck. Times can get tough and I\'m glad poetry comes alongside us during these struggles. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:34
arqios said:
Gives the feeling of someone being somehow stuck. Times can get tough and I\'m glad poetry comes alongside us during these struggles. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:34
Shadows
Cassie58 said:
There is a longing here to escape. A sad read, to think you are suffering. Stay strong. Have s good Tuesday.
February 11th, 2025 03:45
Cassie58 said:
There is a longing here to escape. A sad read, to think you are suffering. Stay strong. Have s good Tuesday.
February 11th, 2025 03:45
Shadows
Poetic Licence said:
Some painful inner reflection going on in this piece, and the overwhelming desire to break out of the painful cycle, yet not feeling they have the strength to do that. Take care
February 11th, 2025 03:20
Poetic Licence said:
Some painful inner reflection going on in this piece, and the overwhelming desire to break out of the painful cycle, yet not feeling they have the strength to do that. Take care
February 11th, 2025 03:20
Shadows
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s so interesting how the shadows are a reminder of company that is positive, and a reminder of company that is negative, that you will never be alone... even when you wish you were.
February 10th, 2025 18:49
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s so interesting how the shadows are a reminder of company that is positive, and a reminder of company that is negative, that you will never be alone... even when you wish you were.
February 10th, 2025 18:49
Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
Existential and self searching. This poem is soul searching and a bit painful. Lovely
February 10th, 2025 17:26
sorenbarrett said:
Existential and self searching. This poem is soul searching and a bit painful. Lovely
February 10th, 2025 17:26
Picture me
Poetic Licence said:
Very powerful and sad piece of writing, it is a horrible place to be and a way to feel. I have been there and all i can say is i hope you are ok, all the best
February 10th, 2025 03:28
Poetic Licence said:
Very powerful and sad piece of writing, it is a horrible place to be and a way to feel. I have been there and all i can say is i hope you are ok, all the best
February 10th, 2025 03:28
Picture me
arqios said:
Been there and can’t say I would wish that on anyone else. Hope you are okay. One of the best ways poetically depicting this emotion! 🙏🏻🕊 Liked and Faved 👍🏻👍🏻
February 10th, 2025 02:58
arqios said:
Been there and can’t say I would wish that on anyone else. Hope you are okay. One of the best ways poetically depicting this emotion! 🙏🏻🕊 Liked and Faved 👍🏻👍🏻
February 10th, 2025 02:58
Picture me
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of fear and how others don\'t see it. It is under masks of others desired perceptions that we live our lives. A powerful write
February 9th, 2025 17:25
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of fear and how others don\'t see it. It is under masks of others desired perceptions that we live our lives. A powerful write
February 9th, 2025 17:25
Picture me
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of fear and how others don\'t see it. It is under masks of others desired perceptions that we live our lives. A powerful write
February 9th, 2025 17:25
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of fear and how others don\'t see it. It is under masks of others desired perceptions that we live our lives. A powerful write
February 9th, 2025 17:25
Picture me
NinjaGirl said:
Heartbreaking, but a true message that shows how others don\'t know what\'s going on for us.
February 9th, 2025 16:05
NinjaGirl said:
Heartbreaking, but a true message that shows how others don\'t know what\'s going on for us.
February 9th, 2025 16:05
Silence
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and rendered with exceptional details to seemingly emphasize, despite brevity, the intent. Lovely. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 09:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and rendered with exceptional details to seemingly emphasize, despite brevity, the intent. Lovely. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 09:27
Assault me
NinjaGirl said:
My girl, you did just share your story... and that fear they caused in you, you\'re showing them they don\'t have control anymore. I am so proud of you, this is beautiful, certainly in a sad way, but beautiful because you\'ve decided you won\'t let them win. They covered your mouth but now you\'re choosing to scream despite that. You\'re choosing to open the door, to let people see who this person really is. Most beautiful work, keep rising girl, sending my love.
February 8th, 2025 13:42
NinjaGirl said:
My girl, you did just share your story... and that fear they caused in you, you\'re showing them they don\'t have control anymore. I am so proud of you, this is beautiful, certainly in a sad way, but beautiful because you\'ve decided you won\'t let them win. They covered your mouth but now you\'re choosing to scream despite that. You\'re choosing to open the door, to let people see who this person really is. Most beautiful work, keep rising girl, sending my love.
February 8th, 2025 13:42
Assault me
Poetic Licence said:
It is not OK and that is not a friend, no one has to put up with abuse of any sort let alone that kind. Powerful, painful, sad and emotionally write, take care
February 8th, 2025 07:47
Poetic Licence said:
It is not OK and that is not a friend, no one has to put up with abuse of any sort let alone that kind. Powerful, painful, sad and emotionally write, take care
February 8th, 2025 07:47
Assault me
arqios said:
That isn’t okay to be treated like that. And no one should be called friend that does that. It’s abuse of the worst kind.
February 8th, 2025 05:37
arqios said:
That isn’t okay to be treated like that. And no one should be called friend that does that. It’s abuse of the worst kind.
February 8th, 2025 05:37
Assault me
sorenbarrett said:
Understanding can be mistaken, intentions mistaken, character mistaken, we often are fooled by what we thought was but is not. A most interesting and mind provoking write
February 8th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Understanding can be mistaken, intentions mistaken, character mistaken, we often are fooled by what we thought was but is not. A most interesting and mind provoking write
February 8th, 2025 04:30
Silence
sorenbarrett said:
I love your style in this poem where font tells as much as words and the contradiction in the two does more than either alone. Brilliant and deserves a fave
February 7th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
I love your style in this poem where font tells as much as words and the contradiction in the two does more than either alone. Brilliant and deserves a fave
February 7th, 2025 04:48
Silence
orchidee said:
COOEEEE, YOO-HOO!! I broke the silence! lol. Do ya hear me?! heehee.
February 6th, 2025 14:19
orchidee said:
COOEEEE, YOO-HOO!! I broke the silence! lol. Do ya hear me?! heehee.
February 6th, 2025 14:19
Silence
Poetic Licence said:
Very powerful, full of torment , anguish and pain. Well expressed
February 6th, 2025 13:37
Poetic Licence said:
Very powerful, full of torment , anguish and pain. Well expressed
February 6th, 2025 13:37
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