Comments received on poems by LP2187
Treacherous Beauty of Sin
orchidee said:
Oh, I dunno about those iambic thingys anyway. I wouldn\'t recognise one if I met one in the street! lol.
January 12th, 2025 08:07
orchidee said:
Oh, I dunno about those iambic thingys anyway. I wouldn\'t recognise one if I met one in the street! lol.
January 12th, 2025 08:07
Treacherous Beauty of Sin
TobaniNataiella said:
It paints many pictures as you read it, i know nothing about the terminology you have used in the authors comments, but i really enjoyed the read.
January 12th, 2025 05:37
TobaniNataiella said:
It paints many pictures as you read it, i know nothing about the terminology you have used in the authors comments, but i really enjoyed the read.
January 12th, 2025 05:37
Treacherous Beauty of Sin
arqios said:
It\'s wonderful to have a first go and see it posted up. Of course we continue to grow and develop as we go on in this journey of writing. Enjoy it and be happy in this first victory. The next sonnet is just around the corner! 🕊️👍
January 12th, 2025 05:04
arqios said:
It\'s wonderful to have a first go and see it posted up. Of course we continue to grow and develop as we go on in this journey of writing. Enjoy it and be happy in this first victory. The next sonnet is just around the corner! 🕊️👍
January 12th, 2025 05:04
Home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A beautiful poem I find a home in. Easily faved! Well done!
January 12th, 2025 00:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A beautiful poem I find a home in. Easily faved! Well done!
January 12th, 2025 00:13
Home
arqios said:
Yes! I must remind myself several times a day that home is where your heart is! Thanks for this uplifting poem. 🕊🙏🏻🕊
January 11th, 2025 18:34
arqios said:
Yes! I must remind myself several times a day that home is where your heart is! Thanks for this uplifting poem. 🕊🙏🏻🕊
January 11th, 2025 18:34
Home
NinjaGirl said:
home is almost never a place, I think. its who you feel safe with
January 11th, 2025 14:05
NinjaGirl said:
home is almost never a place, I think. its who you feel safe with
January 11th, 2025 14:05
Home
TobaniNataiella said:
You heart only resides in one place and it will live there forever, enjoyed the read
January 11th, 2025 10:20
TobaniNataiella said:
You heart only resides in one place and it will live there forever, enjoyed the read
January 11th, 2025 10:20
Home
Cassie58 said:
Home is where the heart is and that could be with the living or with the departed depending on circumstances. No matter where in the world I am, I know where home is. A lovely poem.
January 11th, 2025 09:31
Cassie58 said:
Home is where the heart is and that could be with the living or with the departed depending on circumstances. No matter where in the world I am, I know where home is. A lovely poem.
January 11th, 2025 09:31
My brother and I
Cheeky Missy said:
[I wondered after you posted this whether you\'d seen mine on the same topic, but couldn\'t guess.] Yes siblings are treasures, despite the fact we don\'t always see eye to eye and can squabble like fierce enemies. Lovely and beautifully rendered with great imagery and a heartening poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 11th, 2025 08:07
Cheeky Missy said:
[I wondered after you posted this whether you\'d seen mine on the same topic, but couldn\'t guess.] Yes siblings are treasures, despite the fact we don\'t always see eye to eye and can squabble like fierce enemies. Lovely and beautifully rendered with great imagery and a heartening poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 11th, 2025 08:07
The Monster in the Forest
NinjaGirl said:
this is totally giving Frankenstein vibes. It reminded me first of Beowulf though! Being hated teaches you to hate...
January 10th, 2025 14:06
NinjaGirl said:
this is totally giving Frankenstein vibes. It reminded me first of Beowulf though! Being hated teaches you to hate...
January 10th, 2025 14:06
The Monster in the Forest
arqios said:
Oh good first poem, it brought my thoughts to Frankenstein’s monster almost immediately and kept me riveted until confirmation of that thought presented itself. Much enjoyed.
January 10th, 2025 07:34
arqios said:
Oh good first poem, it brought my thoughts to Frankenstein’s monster almost immediately and kept me riveted until confirmation of that thought presented itself. Much enjoyed.
January 10th, 2025 07:34
The Monster in the Forest
TobaniNataiella said:
I feel this can also relate to some one who does not fit in the crowd and is isolated, picked on etc. There desire and need to be accepted and loved and the hurt that grows through the constant rejection, eventually turns them into a monster. Another very good piece of poetry and read
January 10th, 2025 04:22
TobaniNataiella said:
I feel this can also relate to some one who does not fit in the crowd and is isolated, picked on etc. There desire and need to be accepted and loved and the hurt that grows through the constant rejection, eventually turns them into a monster. Another very good piece of poetry and read
January 10th, 2025 04:22
My brother and I
NinjaGirl said:
so true, we hate \'em, we love \'em, they\'re our siblings. you are very skilled with rhyme
January 9th, 2025 21:47
NinjaGirl said:
so true, we hate \'em, we love \'em, they\'re our siblings. you are very skilled with rhyme
January 9th, 2025 21:47
My brother and I
TobaniNataiella said:
A strong message that family is family, even thou at times of course you test that belief. A poem of a strong and loving bond, enjoyed the read
January 9th, 2025 02:52
TobaniNataiella said:
A strong message that family is family, even thou at times of course you test that belief. A poem of a strong and loving bond, enjoyed the read
January 9th, 2025 02:52
My brother and I
arqios said:
Very touching. A dynamic of feeling and esteem in flux, which resonates between myself and my own siblings. Beautiful and true 🕊🙏🏻
January 9th, 2025 02:19
arqios said:
Very touching. A dynamic of feeling and esteem in flux, which resonates between myself and my own siblings. Beautiful and true 🕊🙏🏻
January 9th, 2025 02:19
Parted the dark curtains
NinjaGirl said:
I love this, \"wise words with LP2187!\" I also love the fact that it rhymes, and is so long at the same time! super impressive!
January 8th, 2025 19:49
NinjaGirl said:
I love this, \"wise words with LP2187!\" I also love the fact that it rhymes, and is so long at the same time! super impressive!
January 8th, 2025 19:49
Parted the dark curtains
TobaniNataiella said:
A great ;piece of work, written with honesty and positivity, a really good read, Thank you
January 8th, 2025 07:42
TobaniNataiella said:
A great ;piece of work, written with honesty and positivity, a really good read, Thank you
January 8th, 2025 07:42
Parted the dark curtains
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, three years of wisdom wrapped up in a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing! Really enjoyed this. ❤️🙏
January 8th, 2025 07:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, three years of wisdom wrapped up in a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing! Really enjoyed this. ❤️🙏
January 8th, 2025 07:33
Parted the dark curtains
arqios said:
A compendium of life wisdom! Thanks for sharing.🙏🏻🕊
January 8th, 2025 07:10
arqios said:
A compendium of life wisdom! Thanks for sharing.🙏🏻🕊
January 8th, 2025 07:10
I\'m looking back on the year
jim56 said:
hi like this poem says a lot
words you haved used expresses the poem well
nice flow well written keep it up
you have a talent for writing
January 7th, 2025 16:53
jim56 said:
hi like this poem says a lot
words you haved used expresses the poem well
nice flow well written keep it up
you have a talent for writing
January 7th, 2025 16:53
Eternal blight
NinjaGirl said:
I really really like the imagery in this poem...the rusted and burnt cage shows what they\'ve done to us, they don\'t trust us even when they hold us captive
January 7th, 2025 12:09
NinjaGirl said:
I really really like the imagery in this poem...the rusted and burnt cage shows what they\'ve done to us, they don\'t trust us even when they hold us captive
January 7th, 2025 12:09
Eternal blight
arqios said:
The poem\'s exploration of the character\'s malevolent thoughts and the curse they place on the virtuous adds a layer of complexity to their identity. It effectively conveys the torment and isolation of a character struggling with their own darkness; made me wonder how dissimilar or paralleled are the thoughts of the mass shooters that have proliferated in the last century.
January 7th, 2025 06:35
arqios said:
The poem\'s exploration of the character\'s malevolent thoughts and the curse they place on the virtuous adds a layer of complexity to their identity. It effectively conveys the torment and isolation of a character struggling with their own darkness; made me wonder how dissimilar or paralleled are the thoughts of the mass shooters that have proliferated in the last century.
January 7th, 2025 06:35
Eternal blight
TobaniNataiella said:
I sense a touch of anger and questioning in this piece, not just about why am i but who am i, enjoyed the read.
January 7th, 2025 04:27
TobaniNataiella said:
I sense a touch of anger and questioning in this piece, not just about why am i but who am i, enjoyed the read.
January 7th, 2025 04:27
Eternal blight
rin said:
Why am I alive? Of course God doesn\'t answer, so I have no choice but to explore on my own. This is my favorite poem that makes me think about many things.
January 7th, 2025 03:21
rin said:
Why am I alive? Of course God doesn\'t answer, so I have no choice but to explore on my own. This is my favorite poem that makes me think about many things.
January 7th, 2025 03:21
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