Comments received on poems by Rho1975



I Am A Monster Born Of Woe
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Lovely poem. I read the lines \"For every wound I’ve ever sown,
Has bound me to my aching throne.\" - over and over. Somehow those were saying something deep to me. Excellent work!

December 9th, 2024 12:06

A Life Dismantled
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Absolutely loved it! Raw, honest and no unnecessary adornment - once again it seemed like an artist painting a picture on the canvas.

December 9th, 2024 12:02

A Life Dismantled
TobaniNataiella said:

A very powerfully written poem, depicting the devasting effect addictions have on all involved.

December 8th, 2024 17:18

A Life Dismantled
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 8th, 2024 15:28

A Life Dismantled
aDarkerMind said:

very touching Rhonda.
a subject very close to my heart.

and one to favour, for sure.

December 8th, 2024 13:44

A Life Dismantled
Cassie58 said:

Addictions wreck families. A very sad account of the impact on the nearest and dearest. This is a subject I know about. Penned beautifully. Touched my heart.

December 8th, 2024 13:37

The Edge of Everything
Cassie58 said:

A powerful write and the message conveyed so artistically. Beautiful poetic expression in some of the lines. Well done.

December 6th, 2024 05:01

I Am A Monster Born Of Woe
sorenbarrett said:

A poem with power and deep emotion. It evokes a sense of outrage as well as compassion. It is very well written with good meter inverse that flows well. Very nicely done.

December 6th, 2024 04:17

The Edge of Everything
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely written this poem tightly describes the difficulty in letting go of a relationship. It is very nicely written in verse. It is powerful and evokes a great deal of emotion. There are several nice lines in this poem.“On jagged truths, I dared to tread” “I’ve heard that saving what destroys leads only to another war” These are great lines.

December 6th, 2024 04:14

The Edge of Everything
TobaniNataiella said:

For a very difficult subject, you have dealt with beautifully in your poem, very well written

December 5th, 2024 18:00

Barefoot in the Snow
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Seemed like watching a painter applying brush strokes on the canvas and a visceral image popping out like magic. Tryely accessible and memorable poetry...loved it!

November 29th, 2024 01:21

Barefoot in the Snow
TobaniNataiella said:

A touching piece, i hope the little one is coping well.

November 29th, 2024 00:55

Barefoot in the Snow
rin said:

Your one step in the present cannot be reached without your life in the past.
It shines in your poetry now, and I think it is beautiful.

November 28th, 2024 23:07

Barefoot in the Snow
sorenbarrett said:

Haunting and cold this is a dark poem that conveys its message through wonderful wording and great images very nicely done

November 28th, 2024 16:43

I Am A Monster Born Of Woe
TobaniNataiella said:

I like the honesty in the poem, sometimes it is very hard to write what you really feel.

November 27th, 2024 18:56