Comments received on poems by Amandatoriii
Room to Room in
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem between childhood and adulthood in memory we look back and find ourselves in the middle. But then no matter where we are in life we are in the middle. Well done
June 17th, 2026 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem between childhood and adulthood in memory we look back and find ourselves in the middle. But then no matter where we are in life we are in the middle. Well done
June 17th, 2026 20:49
Tunnel Vision
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes a strong plea for entry and to just be given a chance. Nicely written.
June 11th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
This poem makes a strong plea for entry and to just be given a chance. Nicely written.
June 11th, 2026 04:03
I told myself I could leave anytime
sorenbarrett said:
Growing on each other a poem of becoming accustomed well done
May 12th, 2026 23:26
sorenbarrett said:
Growing on each other a poem of becoming accustomed well done
May 12th, 2026 23:26
A truth, finally.
sorenbarrett said:
There is loneliness in this poem a distant sadness that one can not blame anyone for but is carried onward. Well written
May 7th, 2026 19:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is loneliness in this poem a distant sadness that one can not blame anyone for but is carried onward. Well written
May 7th, 2026 19:46
Stratomatic
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of being accepted and wanted for who one is comes through in this poem. Very nice
February 4th, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of being accepted and wanted for who one is comes through in this poem. Very nice
February 4th, 2026 04:36
After Dinner Mints
sorenbarrett said:
This poem does a dance between shyness and attraction. A lovely write
November 7th, 2025 15:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem does a dance between shyness and attraction. A lovely write
November 7th, 2025 15:14
I Am Here Now
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that feels intimate and yet distant. It holds trepidation yet is alluring. Nicely worded
November 6th, 2025 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that feels intimate and yet distant. It holds trepidation yet is alluring. Nicely worded
November 6th, 2025 13:59
The Corner That Waits
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, enjoyed
November 5th, 2025 12:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, enjoyed
November 5th, 2025 12:17
The Corner That Waits
sorenbarrett said:
With the meter and rhythm of a limerick it tells a far different story not of humor but of love and accompanying feelings of longing and a wistfulness. Very nicely composed. I loved the meter and flow
November 5th, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
With the meter and rhythm of a limerick it tells a far different story not of humor but of love and accompanying feelings of longing and a wistfulness. Very nicely composed. I loved the meter and flow
November 5th, 2025 08:28
“Every Inch of You”
sorenbarrett said:
There is nothing like passion in a poem or relationship and when the two meet it is dynamite
November 2nd, 2025 18:53
sorenbarrett said:
There is nothing like passion in a poem or relationship and when the two meet it is dynamite
November 2nd, 2025 18:53
The Way We Keep Existing
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a love left behind but still recognized, tested and that still glows as an ember. It has a haunting feel to it and seems wistful. Nicely done
October 27th, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a love left behind but still recognized, tested and that still glows as an ember. It has a haunting feel to it and seems wistful. Nicely done
October 27th, 2025 03:45
The Way We Keep Existing
peto said:
I hope however this is about gets to read it
Hopefully next time you don\'t need to hide those pieces
Feels like you\'ve showed some of them in this
A sense of longing and regret
Almost feel guilty for enjoying the read
October 27th, 2025 03:31
peto said:
I hope however this is about gets to read it
Hopefully next time you don\'t need to hide those pieces
Feels like you\'ve showed some of them in this
A sense of longing and regret
Almost feel guilty for enjoying the read
October 27th, 2025 03:31
Unsaid
sorenbarrett said:
The desire to give provoked by looks from another nicely expressed in this poem. Well done
October 13th, 2025 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
The desire to give provoked by looks from another nicely expressed in this poem. Well done
October 13th, 2025 08:10
Your Lips
sorenbarrett said:
An absence so obviously felt in this poem of missing someone. Nicely worded
September 30th, 2025 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
An absence so obviously felt in this poem of missing someone. Nicely worded
September 30th, 2025 16:03
If I don’t see you again
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognized error in choice far too late and a sense of darkness to it. Well worded and with some occasional rhyme and near rhyme. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognized error in choice far too late and a sense of darkness to it. Well worded and with some occasional rhyme and near rhyme. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 09:49
A Little Longer Than I Thought
sorenbarrett said:
Some great allegories and lines very nicely written a poem of realization that patience is needed in healing a person and preparing them for a new relationship. Well done
July 26th, 2025 16:18
sorenbarrett said:
Some great allegories and lines very nicely written a poem of realization that patience is needed in healing a person and preparing them for a new relationship. Well done
July 26th, 2025 16:18
Nothing Else Matters
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write about holding onto the love and affection and hoping the distance between them, one day narrows, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 07:29
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write about holding onto the love and affection and hoping the distance between them, one day narrows, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 07:29
Nothing Else Matters
sorenbarrett said:
Opposites attract they say and sometimes compliment. A good poem of holding onto desire and love. Nicely done
July 1st, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Opposites attract they say and sometimes compliment. A good poem of holding onto desire and love. Nicely done
July 1st, 2025 06:54
The Weight of Almost
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely and positive write of perseverance and hanging in, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 02:19
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely and positive write of perseverance and hanging in, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 02:19
The Weight of Almost
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of overcoming and persevering very nice
May 6th, 2025 20:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of overcoming and persevering very nice
May 6th, 2025 20:22
I’m tired
Poetic Licence said:
And you should be proud, although it is not a positive subject to write about, the way you have expressed your feelings will be positive to those who are suffering the same. Well Written
February 11th, 2025 03:27
Poetic Licence said:
And you should be proud, although it is not a positive subject to write about, the way you have expressed your feelings will be positive to those who are suffering the same. Well Written
February 11th, 2025 03:27
Anchor in the Storm
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of security felt in the presence of another a place of shelter from life\'s storms. Nicely written
February 1st, 2025 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of security felt in the presence of another a place of shelter from life\'s storms. Nicely written
February 1st, 2025 09:08
A Birthday Suicide
Poetic Licence said:
A well expressed piece and glad you came out the other end, Very well written
February 1st, 2025 01:12
Poetic Licence said:
A well expressed piece and glad you came out the other end, Very well written
February 1st, 2025 01:12
