Comments received on poems by Amandatoriii



Your Lips
sorenbarrett said:

An absence so obviously felt in this poem of missing someone. Nicely worded

September 30th, 2025 16:03

If I donโ€™t see you again
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of recognized error in choice far too late and a sense of darkness to it. Well worded and with some occasional rhyme and near rhyme. Nicely done

September 22nd, 2025 09:49

โ€œA Little Longer Than I Thoughtโ€
sorenbarrett said:

Some great allegories and lines very nicely written a poem of realization that patience is needed in healing a person and preparing them for a new relationship. Well done

July 26th, 2025 16:18

Nothing Else Matters
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful write about holding onto the love and affection and hoping the distance between them, one day narrows, enjoyed the read

July 1st, 2025 07:29

Nothing Else Matters
sorenbarrett said:

Opposites attract they say and sometimes compliment. A good poem of holding onto desire and love. Nicely done

July 1st, 2025 06:54

The Weight of Almost
Poetic Licence said:

That is a lovely and positive write of perseverance and hanging in, nicely written and expressed

May 7th, 2025 02:19

The Weight of Almost
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of overcoming and persevering very nice

May 6th, 2025 20:22

Iโ€™m tired
Poetic Licence said:

And you should be proud, although it is not a positive subject to write about, the way you have expressed your feelings will be positive to those who are suffering the same. Well Written

February 11th, 2025 03:27

Anchor in the Storm
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 1st, 2025 17:31

Anchor in the Storm
sorenbarrett said:

A sense of security felt in the presence of another a place of shelter from life\'s storms. Nicely written

February 1st, 2025 09:08

A Birthday Suicide
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

February 1st, 2025 05:29

A Birthday Suicide
Poetic Licence said:

A well expressed piece and glad you came out the other end, Very well written

February 1st, 2025 01:12

A Birthday Suicide
2781 said:

I am glad you survived.

January 31st, 2025 23:23