Comments received on poems by Amandatoriii
The Way We Keep Existing
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a love left behind but still recognized, tested and that still glows as an ember. It has a haunting feel to it and seems wistful. Nicely done
October 27th, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a love left behind but still recognized, tested and that still glows as an ember. It has a haunting feel to it and seems wistful. Nicely done
October 27th, 2025 03:45
The Way We Keep Existing
peto said:
I hope however this is about gets to read it
Hopefully next time you don\'t need to hide those pieces
Feels like you\'ve showed some of them in this
A sense of longing and regret
Almost feel guilty for enjoying the read
October 27th, 2025 03:31
peto said:
I hope however this is about gets to read it
Hopefully next time you don\'t need to hide those pieces
Feels like you\'ve showed some of them in this
A sense of longing and regret
Almost feel guilty for enjoying the read
October 27th, 2025 03:31
Unsaid
sorenbarrett said:
The desire to give provoked by looks from another nicely expressed in this poem. Well done
October 13th, 2025 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
The desire to give provoked by looks from another nicely expressed in this poem. Well done
October 13th, 2025 08:10
Your Lips
sorenbarrett said:
An absence so obviously felt in this poem of missing someone. Nicely worded
September 30th, 2025 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
An absence so obviously felt in this poem of missing someone. Nicely worded
September 30th, 2025 16:03
If I don’t see you again
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognized error in choice far too late and a sense of darkness to it. Well worded and with some occasional rhyme and near rhyme. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognized error in choice far too late and a sense of darkness to it. Well worded and with some occasional rhyme and near rhyme. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 09:49
“A Little Longer Than I Thought”
sorenbarrett said:
Some great allegories and lines very nicely written a poem of realization that patience is needed in healing a person and preparing them for a new relationship. Well done
July 26th, 2025 16:18
sorenbarrett said:
Some great allegories and lines very nicely written a poem of realization that patience is needed in healing a person and preparing them for a new relationship. Well done
July 26th, 2025 16:18
Nothing Else Matters
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write about holding onto the love and affection and hoping the distance between them, one day narrows, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 07:29
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write about holding onto the love and affection and hoping the distance between them, one day narrows, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 07:29
Nothing Else Matters
sorenbarrett said:
Opposites attract they say and sometimes compliment. A good poem of holding onto desire and love. Nicely done
July 1st, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Opposites attract they say and sometimes compliment. A good poem of holding onto desire and love. Nicely done
July 1st, 2025 06:54
The Weight of Almost
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely and positive write of perseverance and hanging in, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 02:19
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely and positive write of perseverance and hanging in, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 02:19
The Weight of Almost
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of overcoming and persevering very nice
May 6th, 2025 20:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of overcoming and persevering very nice
May 6th, 2025 20:22
I’m tired
Poetic Licence said:
And you should be proud, although it is not a positive subject to write about, the way you have expressed your feelings will be positive to those who are suffering the same. Well Written
February 11th, 2025 03:27
Poetic Licence said:
And you should be proud, although it is not a positive subject to write about, the way you have expressed your feelings will be positive to those who are suffering the same. Well Written
February 11th, 2025 03:27
Anchor in the Storm
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of security felt in the presence of another a place of shelter from life\'s storms. Nicely written
February 1st, 2025 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of security felt in the presence of another a place of shelter from life\'s storms. Nicely written
February 1st, 2025 09:08
A Birthday Suicide
Poetic Licence said:
A well expressed piece and glad you came out the other end, Very well written
February 1st, 2025 01:12
Poetic Licence said:
A well expressed piece and glad you came out the other end, Very well written
February 1st, 2025 01:12
