Comments received on poems by Amandatoriii



The Way We Keep Existing
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of a love left behind but still recognized, tested and that still glows as an ember. It has a haunting feel to it and seems wistful. Nicely done

October 27th, 2025 03:45

The Way We Keep Existing
peto said:

I hope however this is about gets to read it
Hopefully next time you don\'t need to hide those pieces
Feels like you\'ve showed some of them in this
A sense of longing and regret
Almost feel guilty for enjoying the read


October 27th, 2025 03:31

Unsaid
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

October 13th, 2025 08:48

Unsaid
sorenbarrett said:

The desire to give provoked by looks from another nicely expressed in this poem. Well done

October 13th, 2025 08:10

Your Lips
sorenbarrett said:

An absence so obviously felt in this poem of missing someone. Nicely worded

September 30th, 2025 16:03

If I donโ€™t see you again
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of recognized error in choice far too late and a sense of darkness to it. Well worded and with some occasional rhyme and near rhyme. Nicely done

September 22nd, 2025 09:49

โ€œA Little Longer Than I Thoughtโ€
sorenbarrett said:

Some great allegories and lines very nicely written a poem of realization that patience is needed in healing a person and preparing them for a new relationship. Well done

July 26th, 2025 16:18

Nothing Else Matters
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful write about holding onto the love and affection and hoping the distance between them, one day narrows, enjoyed the read

July 1st, 2025 07:29

Nothing Else Matters
sorenbarrett said:

Opposites attract they say and sometimes compliment. A good poem of holding onto desire and love. Nicely done

July 1st, 2025 06:54

The Weight of Almost
Poetic Licence said:

That is a lovely and positive write of perseverance and hanging in, nicely written and expressed

May 7th, 2025 02:19

The Weight of Almost
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of overcoming and persevering very nice

May 6th, 2025 20:22

Iโ€™m tired
Poetic Licence said:

And you should be proud, although it is not a positive subject to write about, the way you have expressed your feelings will be positive to those who are suffering the same. Well Written

February 11th, 2025 03:27

Anchor in the Storm
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 1st, 2025 17:31

Anchor in the Storm
sorenbarrett said:

A sense of security felt in the presence of another a place of shelter from life\'s storms. Nicely written

February 1st, 2025 09:08

A Birthday Suicide
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

February 1st, 2025 05:29

A Birthday Suicide
Poetic Licence said:

A well expressed piece and glad you came out the other end, Very well written

February 1st, 2025 01:12

A Birthday Suicide
2781 said:

I am glad you survived.

January 31st, 2025 23:23