Comments received on poems by Beck



The Resolution Execution
Friendship said:

Nicely done, your poem revolves around the struggle and often humorous futility of making New Year’s resolutions. The poet reflects on the cyclical nature of setting goals for self-improvement each year, only to find themselves unchanged and disillusioned with the process.

December 30th, 2025 06:06

The Resolution Execution
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and cute the choice of the rhyming word to rhyme with resolution and its meaning for the season is great.

December 30th, 2025 04:51

To Be Naked
Friendship said:

Well written, your poem revolves around the struggle for authenticity in a world dominated by superficial beauty standards and societal pressures. The poet explores the tension between the desire to conform to these standards and the journey toward self-acceptance and embracing one\'s natural self. The subject matter includes themes of bravery, vulnerability, beauty, and the critique of cosmetic culture.

December 29th, 2025 10:01

To Be Naked
sorenbarrett said:

We spend so much time and effort in being what others value we have no time for what we are and value. A lovely write poignant and well written with great rhyme and flow it speaks to the vanity and fear that we have of what others think and value putting ourselves and our values below theirs. We are slaves to public opinion making even what we know is right subservient to the will of others. A fave

December 29th, 2025 04:23

No True Distance
sorenbarrett said:

An interesting metaphor in this poem nicely rhymed and with good flow. Well done

December 28th, 2025 17:34

Seasons of Love
Poetic Licence said:

Time has it effect on everything and everything fades in the end, if we except that then peace can be found, enjoyed the read

August 13th, 2025 15:44

Seasons of Love
sorenbarrett said:

Even love can suffer from entropy and time wears on all things. A lovely poem that is more real than ideal with such lovely metaphor. A fave

August 13th, 2025 14:17

🖤Unfelt 🖤
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful write of how through an abusive past we always have mistrust in general but especially in people, we then box our memories neatly into seperate boxes and store away but don\'t forget them, nicely expressed and written write

August 12th, 2025 08:07

🖤Unfelt 🖤
sorenbarrett said:

There is good rhythm and rhyme to this poem that gives a strong message of withdrawal and distrust. Nicely written with a good meter and flow. Well done

August 12th, 2025 04:49

A Wave of Love
Salvia.S said:

Beautiful write!!!

May 1st, 2025 21:54

A Wave of Love
Tony Grannell said:

The beautiful appreciation of a loved one as one sails the ocean of life in this winsome passage of heart-lifting poetry. Wonderful!

Kind regards,
Tony.

May 1st, 2025 13:28

A Wave of Love
sorenbarrett said:

A write of how companionship and love can calm and ease. A wonderful write

May 1st, 2025 13:24

Trailer Park Trashy
Poetic Licence said:

A touching write on many levels, dealing with inner struggles of a family, the effects it has on the children and how people to easily judge and label from a distance, without any idea of what is really going in the peoples life`s. Expressing some difficult thoughts and feelings very well in this write

February 13th, 2025 12:40

My Clucking Friends
Poetic Licence said:

That is a lovely dedication to your feathered friends, i happen to find them one of the funniest birds around, enjoyed the read.

February 10th, 2025 11:35

The Last Ride
Poetic Licence said:

Reading this i feel you have the control back, very well composed and some great lines, Clowns of sorrows, jugglers of lies for example, really enjoyed the read

February 4th, 2025 15:10

The Last Ride
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor and very nice rhyme in this poem. It reads smoothly and is easy to understand. Lovely

February 4th, 2025 13:09

Sealed Hearts
Swarovski20 said:

Very nice and honest poem. Good powerful write.

February 3rd, 2025 06:48

Sealed Hearts
Poetic Licence said:

A very well written piece of poetry, i feel will resonate with a lot of people, as they say once bitten, twice shy, enjoyed the read

February 3rd, 2025 02:55

Sealed Hearts
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊

February 2nd, 2025 23:21